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Emotionless (Haiku) by Roisin

Try to pull a poem From this my hardened heart's core It comes out jagged.

Nicholas Jones 7-Nov-02/4:53 AM
Nice. You combine the haiku with concrete poetry - the poem is jagged because of the lenght of the middle line.




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