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Digging (Free verse) by WankerPoem
Digging
Between my finger and my thumb
The squat pen rests; as snug as a sword.
Under my window a clean rasping sound
When the spade sinks into gravelly ground:
My dog, digging. I look down
Till his straining rump among the flowerbeds
Bends low, comes up twenty years away
Stooping in rhythm through potato drills
Where he was digging.
The coarse boot nestled on the lug, the shaft
Against the inside knee was levered firmly.
He rooted out tall tops, buried the bright edge deep
To scatter new potatoes that we picked
Loving their cool hardness in our hands.
By God, the old man could handle a Hoe,
Just like his old man.
My grandfather could cut more turf in a day
Than any other man on Toner's bog.
Once I carried him milk in a bottle
Corked sloppily with paper. He straightened up
To drink it, then fell to right away
Nicking and slicing neatly, heaving sods
Over his shoulder, digging down and down
For the good turf. Digging.
The cold smell of potato mold, the squelch and slap
Of soggy peat, the curt cuts of an edge
Through living roots awaken in my head.
But I've no Hoe to follow men like them.
one day ill get my dads hoe
and ill be able to cause an uprising
against the king
just like my Grandfather did in 1507.
one day.
Between my finger and my thumb
The squat sword rests.
I'll dig with it.
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Posted: March 16, 2003 12:25 PM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2003 12:25 PM PST
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