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Digging (Free verse) by WankerPoem

Digging Between my finger and my thumb The squat pen rests; as snug as a sword. Under my window a clean rasping sound When the spade sinks into gravelly ground: My dog, digging. I look down Till his straining rump among the flowerbeds Bends low, comes up twenty years away Stooping in rhythm through potato drills Where he was digging. The coarse boot nestled on the lug, the shaft Against the inside knee was levered firmly. He rooted out tall tops, buried the bright edge deep To scatter new potatoes that we picked Loving their cool hardness in our hands. By God, the old man could handle a Hoe, Just like his old man. My grandfather could cut more turf in a day Than any other man on Toner's bog. Once I carried him milk in a bottle Corked sloppily with paper. He straightened up To drink it, then fell to right away Nicking and slicing neatly, heaving sods Over his shoulder, digging down and down For the good turf. Digging. The cold smell of potato mold, the squelch and slap Of soggy peat, the curt cuts of an edge Through living roots awaken in my head. But I've no Hoe to follow men like them. one day ill get my dads hoe and ill be able to cause an uprising against the king just like my Grandfather did in 1507. one day. Between my finger and my thumb The squat sword rests. I'll dig with it.

horus8 16-Mar-03/3:01 PM
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