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untitled (Free verse) by angel_uy
Shadows loom, flaming high
Darkness falling, consume the faces
listening eyes, with secret words
Unheard screams, stained with time
Unleashed the wind, soars above.
Spilling over, a maze of thoughts
The world is lost, the truth is sought
Lifeless motions, unyeilding tears
Drifting off, confusion swarms
Emotions claw, bleeding through.
Lightning strikes, fears ablaze
Knowing it all, before it happens
Can't change the future, holding on to the past
Pain erupts, the spinning stops
Seeing things clearly, dissapointment eats away.
It's all that's left, no more no less
A new begining, hoping to come soon
The strife be gone, distant are the eyes
When come to focus, a new world, new life
Never to forget, what came to pass.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7263
Posted: March 17, 2003 12:23 PM PST; Last modified: March 17, 2003 12:23 PM PST
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