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untitled (Free verse) by angel_uy

Shadows loom, flaming high Darkness falling, consume the faces listening eyes, with secret words Unheard screams, stained with time Unleashed the wind, soars above. Spilling over, a maze of thoughts The world is lost, the truth is sought Lifeless motions, unyeilding tears Drifting off, confusion swarms Emotions claw, bleeding through. Lightning strikes, fears ablaze Knowing it all, before it happens Can't change the future, holding on to the past Pain erupts, the spinning stops Seeing things clearly, dissapointment eats away. It's all that's left, no more no less A new begining, hoping to come soon The strife be gone, distant are the eyes When come to focus, a new world, new life Never to forget, what came to pass.

horus8 17-Mar-03/3:48 PM
Sir, how dare ye just give the secret confusion poem formula over like this. You have besmirched your last hoof. The time has come to put our feet down. lol.




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