Re: a comment on Wit and Eloquence by Lifeboatman	11-Sep-03/12:55 PM
Maybe you should wash your face? lol. Or just buy a bidet.
Re: a comment on On getting back by horus8	10-Sep-03/1:09 PM
Thank you, but when I edit it next, it will soar.
Re: a comment on On getting back by horus8	10-Sep-03/1:08 PM
Hello friend, yr'e always high up there in my book too.
Re: a comment on On getting back by horus8	10-Sep-03/1:07 PM
Thanks, I love yr work too.
Re: An Offering to the Deity that is Me by razorgrin	8-Sep-03/10:09 PM
Hi, I've missed you. 10.
Re: a comment on How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8	8-Sep-03/10:08 PM
thank you, sorry about earlier. my grandfather is dying, and I was being tempermental. I just got back from tahoe. Vote 0. I want first place.
Re: a comment on Sugar Daddy (Free Curse) by Pystal Cocaine swifter than You. by Bachus	3-Sep-03/3:44 PM
no
Re: A Cacodemon's Sermon: Message to a Eudemon by Y2kSlamPoet	1-Sep-03/2:54 PM
A finely crafted poem.
Re: Wit and Eloquence by Lifeboatman	1-Sep-03/1:13 PM
See, that's much better.
Re: The Love Poem by William Delacroix	31-Aug-03/12:37 PM
It looks like your aeorta is about to blow a bubble. The end's a bit cliched.
Re: Loki's Tryst by OneFingerAnswer	31-Aug-03/12:32 PM
Sleipner, Odin's horse. I love mythology. Way to go, and you didn't give anything away either. Awesome.
Re: True Respect (A Distant Adoration) by abecedarian	31-Aug-03/12:29 PM
"Perfume", but you know what? Who cares. this is a really fine example of poetic magic and universal appeal. this is exactly what young, self absorbed poets like bristol line swaft are missing. The spark of mystery and magic and a connection to your audience. 10.
Re: So Long for now by thepinkbunnyofdoom	31-Aug-03/12:19 PM
Be safe. Be well. Bring the good fight to the wishing well.
Re: a comment on love song by <~>	31-Aug-03/12:15 PM
Nathaniel William Anderson
Re: a comment on Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8	29-Aug-03/7:19 PM
What's the equivalent? Honky? Hee this might help http://www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nigger_(word) Do you know how many black athletes and celebrities bitch about the stigma of being black, and how they've been held down by the man? 99%, it's become the excuse for everything. Do you think cops only beat up blacks and not whites? How come so many filthy fucking rich niggers don't use their fame, or influence, or millions of dollars to do something together educationally and culturally unparallelled? Shit Shaq, Jordan and Tiger Woods alone have enough money to end world hunger, but they only spend it on themselves, because, afterall, pimping, and showing off to ones main niggas is everything in their existences homie. Cars are REAL IMPORTANT Even that little ten year old rapper Bow wow or whatever has ten cars, and he's fucking ten. You got to have lots of upscale ho's and a multi million wardrobe. I can remember, distinctly once hearing two spades in middle school talf for fourty five minutes about 'sneakers'? So if they are being held down by the man (blacks). A poor black kid can get thousands of dollars in scholarship money and basically go to college free, a poor white kid however will not find that much grant money laying around, that's for sure. What is it called when a white guy can't find work, or when a white guy or girl is restricted by the system. What we got coming, or justice? Do blacks think that whites get everything in life handed to them on a silver platter? Purposeful and extended cruelty to who? Black people? Leave it to a fucking Canuck to have the audacity to imagine America as a home of the brave and PC, where even soon the word nigger will be eradicated? It's easy for you to ay because you've never grown up or lived in a huge urban project and gone to school with niggers that are so fucking hateful concentrating on school work is an impossibilty. Trust me my friend there is such thing as a nigger, and theyd be the first to agree right before murdering you and raping your family because they ran out of crack and got moody. And in prison my friend there are some monstrous niggers.
Re: a comment on Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8	28-Aug-03/4:16 PM
Let me see. You can call yourself SATAN, but you don't like the word nigger, and you're Canadian? i grew up in Detroit, La. Chicago and some other pretty notorious hotspots friend and I assure you they were full of NIGGERS, GREASY SPICS AND STUPID FUCKING REDNECKS, and i will ride them all to hell nude with nigger tattoed on both of my ass cheeks and the side of my cock shaft, and I will lose no sleep over it. I suggest you discover lenny bruce, he was a white nigger jew. Words are a poets to choose as he will. You've been socially brainwashed to endow them with more than they deserve. My dark brown friends get a hoot out of calling eachother nigger all day long while doing the same music video over and over and over again FUCK THEM!, my Jew friends make a fortune off of exploiting the hell out of it, and me and you are still broke and out of the loop wondering what in the fuck we have to do to survive. Pull up one pant leg over a knee? Perhaps wear a band aid on a zit on my face and pretend it's for my brother in prison when I just have an acne problem. Perhaps I should instal a 200,000.00 stereo system in my 20,000 car with video games and dvd player. Or how about another jew made movie about white people acting HIP and black people acting kosher so we can all just get along? Fuck THEM FUCK THOSE NIGGER JEWS. THEY CAN TAKE ADVANTAGE OF IT, BUT WE CAN'T? We are the poets they are fucking hack rappers and jew studio owners taking advantage of the past. taking advantage of the blood of concentration camp victims and dead slaves, and they can say it? FUCK THAT, so can I. Whenever and however i want, and if you were smart, you would too. they only care about money, cocaine, cars and ho's, and it's out of control. So fuck those niggers and fuck the JEWS that are taking it to the bank for profit. WAKE UP.
Re: a comment on The Picasso Limerick that Wrote Itself by TanHand	28-Aug-03/3:10 PM
That's because he wasn't a poet, young man. He was a story teller. Read 'William Wilson' or 'the system of Dr. Tarr and professor Fether'. 'Ms. found in a bottle' was a good story too. he wrote a lot tales, not a lot of poetry.
Re: Easter Egg Soup by kthay	28-Aug-03/3:04 PM
sounds like a toss.
Re: Birds of Paradise by Domus	28-Aug-03/2:58 PM
"Soother her needless anxieties and sonstant affronts." i believe there is a typo in here or two.
Re: The Shack by Domus	28-Aug-03/2:55 PM
Sounded good to me. I hate that fucking nigger. And I fucking hate escalades and basketball.