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An Offering to the Deity that is Me (Haiku) by razorgrin Sweet, slick crimson mess
Gore, lurid as a car crash
Slice of cherry pie.
Up the ladder:
Caffeinated Contemplations
Down the ladder:
Untitled (A Dark Angel Litmus)
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Posted: September 8, 2003 5:56 PM PDT; Last modified: September 8, 2003 5:56 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.422622 Overall Rank: 3046 Comments:
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http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.146.238
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8-Sep-03/6:22 PM
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If you don't like it, pass it on down the table.
You know I love it. I ate nigh-on half of that pie...
god, how i have missed your wit. welcome home, razor.
--the poet formerly known as z.
Nice to know I've been missed.
Hi, I've missed you. 10.
Thanks, sweetie.
you're making me hungry. or is that the smell of my roommeates pancakes?
I've got the last of a batch of cookies here, but that doesn't help you much...
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