Re: Results by T.Becquerel II	16-Jul-02/3:06 AM
If this is original, and you added that last part for pure spin. You my friend get the "late night", "happy hour" horus8 hand salute. Cuz that's the kind of stuff that makes me go doo..
Re: A Vision of Dark Desire by crims0ngh0st	16-Jul-02/2:58 AM
You ever get the porn mixed with the family titles? regardless, i have a total boner, but i mean if you're a guy what i meant to say was high five right? Right.... Write
Re: Black Hole Soul by Red_is_life	16-Jul-02/2:53 AM
Well i'll tell you as soon as you mutate a little more into some different styles, and start tweeking things around, and taking bigger risks you'll feel alot more protected by " how you personally are discovering your own style of writing". Basically if you mix improv with a sturdy foundation of classical training, do it for 6 to ten hours a day everyday (if not make up for it in reading) by the time you're say twenty seven or so wink. wink (not that i'm twenty-seven cuz well i'm not?) well i'm actually turning twenty-eight in August. Anyway point being money. money. Writing for cash and making your mark. This never occurs in poetry of course, I'm speaking in realistic terms. Above ground free-lance writing. Below ground underground poetry. Get the best of both worlds. Aim high shoot straight don't forget to masturbate. Buck the system. Que no!
Re: THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8	16-Jul-02/2:33 AM
Yeah... tell me about it. Those two are real heavy hitters, but i find their logic and wit acute to say the least. thanx for the nine. i'm on my way to read you're last poem now
Re: Flies by Red_is_life	16-Jul-02/2:14 AM
Well.. I'll say this. it's good to be young. Take a deep breath. You're onto something. You wear your soul on your sleeve and your heart on your collar when you write. That takes guts and a love for what you're doing. With that going for you the hard part's over. Oh.. and as for the flies...get use to them cuz they never leave and they only get bigger.
Re: Milk Bar by mogwai	16-Jul-02/2:05 AM
Clockwork Orange look out! this is a fuckin masterpiecee
Re: moon rants by bluwiz	16-Jul-02/2:04 AM
I simply adored the way you dared to wear celestial shoes. And correcting yourself, while you go along is fascinating.g
Re: Ode to Bad poetry by unknown	16-Jul-02/1:55 AM
Are you projecting.. cuz if you don't care about either heaven or hell than you could probably give three squirts about the difference between a hack or "an unprofane genius" so why even write the poem if none of these things supposedly bug you? Shouldn't you be off wearing the robes of a Samana, and reading Herman Hesse somewhere in India?e
Re: #5 by mikejedw	16-Jul-02/1:47 AM
Ah... Ah.. Ah. psyche Choooooooooooooooooooooooo.h
Re: Nicotine Ruse by Red_is_life	16-Jul-02/1:45 AM
The serial killer smoked left handed. Schooled by nuns. Abused. He was slow to ash his Lucky strike. Not yet old. Twenty-seven, but moving ever farther from seventeen.(keep up the good work. short and sweet)
Re: IT'S ONLY A JOB by horus8	16-Jul-02/1:31 AM
Charon, should have been capatalized as a noun. oops. fuck it.. anyway he is the mythological (Greek) ferryman on the river Styx. thanx. I love the peppers. their new album is already sounding like award winning shit. They are consistent. later
Re: Take Me Away When You're Gone by Twisted Wizard	16-Jul-02/12:27 AM
Hey dude what's up, you remind me of well me about a decade ago you'll grow wiser and faster. Push harder. Keep the line between honesty and wit semipermeable. Do me a favor, as an experiment, (controled) go to www.gangbox.com and listen to the mp3 called "the salesman". I'd like to hear your opinion. Nice poem, by the way. Try it in Korean. that would shut'em all up..
Re: The Picnic by AmericanWigeon	15-Jul-02/9:55 PM
e.e. cummings? I was thinking of Leotardo in what's eating gilbert graper
Re: the abandoned sea by crin	15-Jul-02/6:18 PM
Everything i couldn't carry in my mind. this is a very good poem
Re: THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8	15-Jul-02/5:53 PM
So is mine, ironic don't you think Oedipusp
Re: Sleepy Geek by razorgrin	15-Jul-02/5:50 PM
I've just come into your town with two displacer beasts and a griffon. I have an imp on my shoulder for a familiar plus i'm half type three demon. you also notice that i posess The hand and eye of Vecna, and The sword of Kas. What do you do. I'll role. l
Re: THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8	15-Jul-02/5:28 PM
Dark Angel, oh....oh...oh. my God, is that really you? I'm beside myself with ring kisses. listen, since i have your ear i just wanna say your Mom called and,"the donkey show's been canceled, but she said dinner is still in the oven" *Latter half of the quote provided by Evil Ed* sponsored by hasbro, Mr.clean and Dent-Or (the firm denture adhesive) Afternoon sirv
Re: THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8	15-Jul-02/5:16 PM
Figures you'd chyme in razorgrin. What no quadruple zero carpetbombing I thought we really had something? luv californication p.s. if u need $ call me
Re: THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8	15-Jul-02/5:08 PM
"Fisting on heroin", haven't you been reading Vogue? Get with it.
Re: Infection by bluwiz	15-Jul-02/5:05 PM
You know for once i'm gonna agree with Razorasmirch (maybe twice) i liked it not because i'm a recovering heroin addict or anything cuz that poem had nada to do with "smack" just fear of choices, props You should end it strongerm