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Infection (Free verse) by bluwiz
It starts with a bite.
A tiny bite of tiny bug,
You???d hardly notice it.
Then starts the itch.
Irritating
But tolerable.
No need for the medicine yet,
Just an itch.
But just the same
It needs relief.
So you scratch.
Fingernails scraping the tiny bump
And it swells
And the flesh turns red
And the skin wears thin.
It breaks,
Raw.
Oozing pus and blood.
Take no heed
Let it be.
No need for medicine yet,
It???s just a tiny wound.
Flies hover over it,
Attracted by the aroma
Of body fluid
Escaping from that raw hole.
It doesn???t even hurt much.
Just an annoying sensation of pain
Every once in a while.
No biggie.
The pus attracts
The dirt in the air
And the filth of the flies.
It holds them close to the open wound,
Nurturing them in the warm flesh
Like a womb.
You hardly notice
The infection starting.
Just an occassional itch
An occassional twinge of pain.
And thus the infections does commence.
Now it???s not just an itch,
Or an occassional twinge of pain.
Now you don???t dare
Lay eyes on the wound.
You already know the ugly truth you???ll find
No, please.
No medicine, you say.
It might hurt.
It will hurt.
You know alcohol will cleanse the filth
And start to mend the ripped flesh.
But no way!
It???s too painful.
And you???re sure it won???t get worse.
Perhaps it will heal on it???s own.
So you wait.
And the wound festers.
Gangrene is starting
And soon it will poison your blood.
The wound is now
A gaping raw hole
Deeply set in your flesh.
Rotting and filthy.
Hurry!
The cleansing may be painful,
But something must be done.
The medicine will make it better,
Maybe.
A choice, just one:
suffer the bite of medication
or the removal of the limb that is its host.
Quickly now,
Before death consumes you
It poisons your blood.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4545455
Weighted score: 4.7272725
Overall Rank: 11849
Posted: July 15, 2002 11:51 AM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2002 11:51 AM PDT
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