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Free verse № 3314

The Picnic

by AmericanWigeon

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

"God's favorite color is blue," said the young boy. "You don't know that, son," said his father. "Be quiet and finish your sandwich," said his mother. "You sure are stupid," said his sister. "God's favorite color is blue," the young boy whispered to himself. "Amen," said the sky.

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[10] deleted user 15-Jul-02/9:30 AM Reply
Like this one a lot, makes me think of ee cummings. This is a poem.
[5] horus8 15-Jul-02/9:55 PM Reply
e.e. cummings? I was thinking of Leotardo in what's eating gilbert graper