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"to do" list:accomplished (Haiku) by razorgrin Rains of blood and fire
Chaos, disorder, discord
My work here is done.
Up the ladder:
saltwater bath
Down the ladder:
mass transit
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.0384617
Posted: July 15, 2002 11:49 AM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2002 11:49 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.038204 Overall Rank: 7221 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 62.190.174.80
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15-Jul-02/1:18 PM
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Is this a reference to something? I thought the last line let the first two down, or something, but I don't know what you were going for.
What? no crucified puppies,I know you've been eyeballing those two in the petco window nextdoor to the sun glass hut
reminds me of a bumped sticker I read once; doesn't really pull it off for me.
Cant see where you are going with this it sounds like something i read on the back of a t-shirt once.
Well i think its jolly super, and all the rest of your should go and play with your button mushrooms and that includes the girls
I think "fire" has two syllables. Unless you're from Texas. Did I spell that right? Syllables? I hope I did.
The jury is out on the syllables in fire. But as an antithesis to the ubiquitous, gentle, natural world of wonder style haiku, I'll buy it. 9.
This is either the 'to do' list of Slobodan Milosevic or my boss. Thank you for retrieving it.
im having such a good time putting down zeros for everything you have
And yet it makes almost no difference. Shouldn't you be out playing sports or vivisecting Jews about now?
I'm not really getting it. Nor am I really liking it.
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