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One Night (Free verse) by agent008
They were everywhere my eyes could see,
Glorious fields of endless
pastures.
Every color seen or unseen
With rainbow meadows hidden by
darkness.
Beautiful how they swayed together
With the breath of their
Mother Nature.
But more beautiful was what caught my eye.
This lonely
flower with sweet intentions.
Glistened gestures lit up by starlight.
Still and calm while the others swayed.
Her full red petals longing for
my touch.
Uncontrollably drawn to the beauty,
I walk to the flower and
humbly kneel.
Thorns massaging my hands I lift her up.
Loving each
second I'm in her presence
She takes me home, my beauty, my Rose.
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Weighted score: 5.755551
Overall Rank: 1803
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:16 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:16 AM PST
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