on appropriation by nentwined
16 Jul 2002, 3:47 PM
Phoenix gets really hot this time of year. when River died, I died.
on This Strange Feeling by snowing
16 Jul 2002, 3:45 PM
Shhh.. be very, very qwuiet...I'm huntin Wabbits.. huuuuu.. huu.
on Social Parody by skaskowski
16 Jul 2002, 3:41 PM
Okay the next time you go hiking in the desert do not. I repeat. Do not eat the small button shaped cacti. holy shit did you see the size of that chicken.. she's my butterfly....
on Oldfinger by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
16 Jul 2002, 3:38 PM
Like an Arachnid. It has a fused head and thorax. Don't you also have a fused colon?d
on she wonders, by <~>
16 Jul 2002, 3:35 PM
Young ladies are just so damn cute until they grow up and turn into Unsavory Hydras. Do me a favor. Don't change. Just remember men will do anything for sex, so odds are. He will.
on cold sonnet by <~>
16 Jul 2002, 3:29 PM
Pheromonal, a real cow puncher. awesome
on Tora Bora 2002 by kawakurdi
16 Jul 2002, 2:55 PM
"And then Alexander the great severed the Gordian Knot with one fell Swoosh of his sword, and all of Persia opened up to him" Socrates quietly explained to Plato one grey afternoon in November-423 BC
on IT'S ONLY A JOB by horus8
16 Jul 2002, 1:30 PM
You know what. You're right. Now that i've gone back and read that comment i've made myself sick. cunt whistle(sorry, tourettes) Your writing bears a striking resemblance to that anonymous guy in the suggestions area. Well one of them anyway. Do you happen to posess the quadruple zero carpet bomb? i'd like to borrow it. bugs. thankse
on Stop it I'm Dizzy! by Lenore
16 Jul 2002, 12:20 PM
Until they all loosen up their towels, let their heads breathe a little and realize that they have been fighting over a chunk of desert the size of Disneyland. affixed with a city (Jerusalum) that's been utterly destroyed and rebuilt about ten times in the last 7,000 years.
on Voyage of the Browne by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
16 Jul 2002, 12:13 PM
You know when i was eleven(1985) i read this great article in juggs magazine (about this chic who was really into playing with her ass(baby cucumbers, and everything). and it got me thinking about my own ass, alot. did you happen to read that one?$
on Love Poem by ferociouskitty
16 Jul 2002, 12:06 PM
And i thought i was cryptic
on IT'S ONLY A JOB by horus8
16 Jul 2002, 12:02 PM
Thank you razora. I really enjoyed reading your D&D poem yesterday. I thought it was incredibly original. You don't meet to many people that know how to reference like that. It was great.
on Results by T.Becquerel II
16 Jul 2002, 3:06 AM
If this is original, and you added that last part for pure spin. You my friend get the "late night", "happy hour" horus8 hand salute. Cuz that's the kind of stuff that makes me go doo..
on A Vision of Dark Desire by crims0ngh0st
16 Jul 2002, 2:58 AM
You ever get the porn mixed with the family titles? regardless, i have a total boner, but i mean if you're a guy what i meant to say was high five right? Right.... Write
on Black Hole Soul by Red_is_life
16 Jul 2002, 2:53 AM
Well i'll tell you as soon as you mutate a little more into some different styles, and start tweeking things around, and taking bigger risks you'll feel alot more protected by " how you personally are discovering your own style of writing". Basically if you mix improv with a sturdy foundation of classical training, do it for 6 to ten hours a day everyday (if not make up for it in reading) by the time you're say twenty seven or so wink. wink (not that i'm twenty-seven cuz well i'm not?) well i'm actually turning twenty-eight in August. Anyway point being money. money. Writing for cash and making your mark. This never occurs in poetry of course, I'm speaking in realistic terms. Above ground free-lance writing. Below ground underground poetry. Get the best of both worlds. Aim high shoot straight don't forget to masturbate. Buck the system. Que no!
on THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8
16 Jul 2002, 2:33 AM
Yeah... tell me about it. Those two are real heavy hitters, but i find their logic and wit acute to say the least. thanx for the nine. i'm on my way to read you're last poem now
on Flies by Red_is_life
16 Jul 2002, 2:14 AM
Well.. I'll say this. it's good to be young. Take a deep breath. You're onto something. You wear your soul on your sleeve and your heart on your collar when you write. That takes guts and a love for what you're doing. With that going for you the hard part's over. Oh.. and as for the flies...get use to them cuz they never leave and they only get bigger.
on moon rants by bluwiz
16 Jul 2002, 2:04 AM
I simply adored the way you dared to wear celestial shoes. And correcting yourself, while you go along is fascinating.g
on Ode to Bad poetry by unknown
16 Jul 2002, 1:55 AM
Are you projecting.. cuz if you don't care about either heaven or hell than you could probably give three squirts about the difference between a hack or "an unprofane genius" so why even write the poem if none of these things supposedly bug you? Shouldn't you be off wearing the robes of a Samana, and reading Herman Hesse somewhere in India?e