A Vision of Dark Desire

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 5 comments

Darkness surrounds me Smooth black silk covers my eyes My body tightly bound Wrists and ankles straining between the ropes My flesh is tight under the pressure Stretched farther apart than imagination could realize Straining to reach pleasure Brutally twisted ropes encase my tender form Coldness consumes me Threatens to reveal me This shivering abyss will not mask my nakedness Exposed to all through a web of restraints The anticipation of the pain excites me I feel lashes bestowed upon me Gracing me with their swift knowledge Educating me with their passion filled punishment My body grinding motionlessly Begging to be filled Torn apart by the rage of many Mere food for the lust of savages Shrouded by their desires A simple ecstasy of my own Trapped in this silky darkness Hiding in a pleasurable world all my own.

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5 comments

[n/a] ifni 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply

I would expect this subject to have sharper conflicts in it's imagery.

[8] horus8 16-Jul-02/2:58 AM Reply

You ever get the porn mixed with the family titles? regardless, i have a total boner, but i mean if you're a guy what i meant to say was high five right? Right.... Write

[n/a] razorgrin 16-Jul-02/5:59 AM Reply

mmm..sexy, but could be a little stronger.very good, all said.

[8] x311 26-Jul-02/8:14 AM Reply

Hmm...seems kinda S&M-ish. :-) I actually like it, though. For some reason it clicks with me.

[6] Tintagiles 13-Sep-04/2:41 PM Reply

Naughty naughty.