Re: Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha	25-May-04/6:59 PM
Is this yours, or Lorcas, or both?
Re: Spitballing by INTRANSIT	25-May-04/6:58 PM
Could have ended stronger. Needs a new last line.
Re: The truths of war by DeadtotheWorld	25-May-04/6:54 PM
Why is this on the best list? You don't even know the difference between "our" and "are"? If you're going to have shit grammar, do it with some imagination could you? liken me does you asshat.
Re: a comment on Unmasking Wyverns by horus8	9-May-04/11:02 PM
Shut up, or me and dark angel will kick your ass wagon and get gravy on your poontain Sasha.
Re: a comment on Spring Cleaning by horus8	9-May-04/10:53 PM
See, unlike you friend, this has nothing to do with me? Why you would think it helps me cope is exactly what's wrong with your work. I don't necessarily have to include myself in my work, or my message. I approach poetry like a bad novelist. Which allows me to completely get into character without pulling a Silvia Plath down the toilel. The majority of my work is done from an angle that allows me to not be 'SO' involved, try it.
Re: a comment on Spring Cleaning by horus8	9-May-04/4:42 PM
Better?
Re: a comment on Spring Cleaning by horus8	9-May-04/4:42 PM
Let me empty out the garage, and reminisce. Let me empty out the closet, and make a list. Let me empty out the house, as promised... Then let me wrap my mouth around cold barrel & paint.
Re: Ghosts by unknown^user	9-May-04/3:59 PM
You weild a comma like a Mexican.
Re: This Summers Ablaze by DeadtotheWorld	9-May-04/3:54 PM
My advice, get out of Idaho before you're completely retarded.
Re: a comment on Barometric pressure & true love (The prince of storms) by Jeremi B. Handrinos	9-May-04/10:15 AM
Dude, stop it, you're scaring me.
Re: As Catullus Said (Updated and Revised) by Sasha	4-May-04/8:14 PM
O wait I get it, Dick.
Re: As Catullus Said (Updated and Revised) by Sasha	4-May-04/8:13 PM
Unreadable smut.
Re: Funeral of My Childhood by Spindle	4-May-04/8:11 PM
'twas me said the bean to Uranus.
Re: Working at the Garden Market by jessicazee	4-May-04/7:53 PM
I'm a hoe.
Re: Being by wHorus8w	29-Apr-04/5:01 PM
I even make myself WE(e)P.
Re: Municipal park by richa	29-Apr-04/3:20 PM
Are all of your poems about paralyzed acorns?
Re: I'll Save You The Effort by wwFrasier Allonbyww	29-Apr-04/1:47 PM
Swit.
Re: a comment on The Negro by Everyone	29-Apr-04/1:45 PM
Faces of death has a mint live monkey brain beating to eating that's quite ace!
Re: your worth to me by francis nor capule	29-Apr-04/12:49 PM
'imperfect' not unperfect.
Re: "Joseph, Joseph" by joe-joe	29-Apr-04/10:48 AM
Second stanza was great, but like a good burger it's trapped between bad buns.