your worth to me

Member since 2004 · Posted 29 Apr 2004 · Edited 26 May 2004 · 4 comments

is it not enough that i long for you? is it not enough i think of you most of my waking hours? is it not enough you make my days worthwhille? is it not enough that you fill me ? if everyone ever thought of what if's , and what would's then nothing would ever be , in this bleak imperfect world i hope you long for me too i hope you think of me, even for a moment i hope i make your day bearable at times i hope i fill you too for i would never trade anything in the whole wide world for you...

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3 votes so far. Yours would make 4.3 votes so far

4 comments

[7] Bobjim 29-Apr-04/11:40 AM Reply

Look, I understand, how you feel, I get it all the time. But be serious, I don't have a clue who you are. Not bad on the poetry side though, deserving of a 7

[7] horus8 29-Apr-04/12:49 PM Reply

'imperfect' not unperfect.

[10] Stephen Robins 30-Apr-04/8:44 AM Reply

Tramp concentrate! Merely add water to have the sweet taste of a tramp in a glass!

[8] Shuushin 26-May-04/10:55 AM Reply

pretty. What's with the spaces before commas sometimes?