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your worth to me (Free verse) by francis nor capule is it not enough that i long for you?
is it not enough i think of you most of my waking hours?
is it not enough you make my days worthwhille?
is it not enough that you fill me ?
if everyone ever thought of what if's , and what would's
then nothing would ever be , in this bleak imperfect world
i hope you long for me too
i hope you think of me, even for a moment
i hope i make your day bearable at times
i hope i fill you too
for i would never trade anything
in the whole wide world for you...
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Tonight (edit)
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Fisting and Wishing
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Posted: April 29, 2004 10:37 AM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2004 9:59 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0397344 Overall Rank: 7166 Comments:
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Bobjim @ 81.135.13.180
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29-Apr-04/11:40 AM
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Look, I understand, how you feel, I get it all the time. But be serious, I don't have a clue who you are. Not bad on the poetry side though, deserving of a 7
'imperfect' not unperfect.
Tramp concentrate! Merely add water to have the sweet taste of a tramp in a glass!
pretty. What's with the spaces before commas sometimes?
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