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your worth to me (Free verse) by francis nor capule
is it not enough that i long for you? is it not enough i think of you most of my waking hours? is it not enough you make my days worthwhille? is it not enough that you fill me ? if everyone ever thought of what if's , and what would's then nothing would ever be , in this bleak imperfect world i hope you long for me too i hope you think of me, even for a moment i hope i make your day bearable at times i hope i fill you too for i would never trade anything in the whole wide world for you...

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7062
Posted: April 29, 2004 10:37 AM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2004 9:59 AM PDT
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[7] Bobjim @ 81.135.13.180 | 29-Apr-04/11:40 AM | Reply
Look, I understand, how you feel, I get it all the time. But be serious, I don't have a clue who you are. Not bad on the poetry side though, deserving of a 7
[7] horus8 @ 66.229.187.185 | 29-Apr-04/12:49 PM | Reply
'imperfect' not unperfect.
[10] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 30-Apr-04/8:44 AM | Reply
Tramp concentrate! Merely add water to have the sweet taste of a tramp in a glass!
[8] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 | 26-May-04/10:55 AM | Reply
pretty. What's with the spaces before commas sometimes?
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