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The Death of an Octopus (Haiku) by tianyi octopus eyeballs
pressed to the tank--
a raised bat
Up the ladder:
Lost Soul Place
Down the ladder:
WITH GOD , NOT THEM (1)
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Posted: September 16, 2005 7:29 AM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2005 7:33 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0397344 Overall Rank: 7061 Comments:
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ay deee @ 204.90.50.252
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16-Sep-05/9:34 AM
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truly great sentiment
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tianyi @ 86.130.65.59
> ay deee
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16-Sep-05/9:40 AM
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Thanks, im working on a Villanelle in a similar vein.
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tianyi @ 86.130.65.59
> tianyi
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16-Sep-05/7:32 PM
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The Villanelle's done if you're interested.
The Villanelle's much better.
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