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After a Show at the Lyceum (Terza Rima) by andrew barnes
Tumbling out of the high Grand Circle,
down Waterloo Bridge, arm linking arm.
Theatre lights reflecting purple,
leaching water-ink to the river's calm.
The Thames' cold flow, a deep orchestra pit,
dark as the wings. Your hand in my palm.
Blind hopes of a first London visit
set a great fire in your dazzling eyes.
I watch, father-like, revelling in it,
but know the flames will fade soon and die.
Even now I notice you tire,
attention drifting, as a gull on the tide.
Back to the hotel, twin beds conspire
a first separation, a slight chink in the tabs.
You dream other cities and new desires.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7059
Posted: May 21, 2005 12:06 PM PDT; Last modified: May 21, 2005 12:06 PM PDT
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