poemranker ::20 most recent comments by horus8 (261-280) and replies

Comments byhorus8, 261–280 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on The Folded Ways Your Eyes Cave by horus8 26 May 2004, 1:52 PM
I did for a 'while' too, but then I changed my mind, twice now.
replying on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 26 May 2004, 1:33 AM
My mother's mother is from Colombia, but of Spanish Decent, and Basque. My father's father is from Greece, Thrace to be exact, and my mother's father is a german hugonaut. he started the first airlines in South America, but he was no astronaut.
replying on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 25 May 2004, 9:45 PM
I see, so it was nothing political about the times? Or does that tie into it too?
replying on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 25 May 2004, 9:44 PM
That's just it, I'm on poemranker to rank poetry not translations.
replying on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 25 May 2004, 9:43 PM
I see, so when I gave you my most 'unserious' of opinions you expected it, so what's the problem?
replying on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 25 May 2004, 9:20 PM
So why should we care, we didn't mention them, lol you did as some sort of enabling defense mechanism that enables you to not feel like a hack (which you are). There's a huge difference between rewriting a myth with a new twist, and what you've done here friend, a HUGE difference.
replying on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 25 May 2004, 9:17 PM
Why? lol, do you even write poetry? Or do you just throw out the names of your heros and play pop goes the weasel? Please, you're a cad, you can't write, and why you compare yourself to the greats is the root of why you won't be, you can't write, you copy with a poor perspective.
replying on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 25 May 2004, 9:14 PM
Who is the rider?
replying on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 25 May 2004, 8:59 PM
And yes, I knew that, in fact it's the basis of my entire conversation Sasha.
replying on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 25 May 2004, 8:57 PM
Why would someone vote on your translation
when they can find one, or buy one done by a translator
that knows why the dusky peak is wounded and bleeding.
on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 25 May 2004, 8:51 PM
So lord! It's even worse, it's your translation of Lorca, making it both of yours? My friend that's just plagiary with a dash of brains and a dollop of cross bred boredom.
replying on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 25 May 2004, 8:48 PM
See, if you don't know what wounded the dusky peak?
You shouldn't be translating his poetry.
replying on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 25 May 2004, 8:46 PM
You're insane, splendid, I see.
replying on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 25 May 2004, 8:45 PM
I'm sorry come again? I thought you said it was both of your work, that's not a mixture?
replying on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 25 May 2004, 8:43 PM
And it's crap, never said I thought Lorca was great... lol,
I implied in your mind, you only translate great things, personally, I think 75% of his writing is trash, but so is mine lol. Now once again, so what wounded the Dusky peak?
replying on Secada (Parody of sasha's lying vagina) by Bachus 25 May 2004, 8:00 PM
And funny.
replying on Secada (Parody of sasha's lying vagina) by Bachus 25 May 2004, 8:00 PM
At least it's 'original'.
on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 25 May 2004, 7:59 PM
Now that friend is bow'ls... I mean
I've seen some sad shit, but that's the gravy.
How's that working for you so far?
on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 25 May 2004, 7:58 PM
I see so basically you take your shit poetry, and
mix it with great poetry, and hope for the best?

How inventive.
replying on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha 25 May 2004, 7:57 PM
Is that clever?

Can I ask you a SERIOUS question?

Please forgive me for being caddy,
but did you say, "in the blackened moon
a dusky peak was bleeding from a wound?"

That's pretty funny, and you thought that up
all by yourself? Amazing.

What wounded it pray tell?