Re: your voice soothes me in the dark by rockinindividual	26-Dec-02/3:09 PM
that was fun.??
Re: The Day the Winter Muse Fighters of the World Came By by <~>	25-Dec-02/10:14 PM
cheers. i can't give it a ten because of the sensitive nature of it 'all', but precise writing.e
Re: a comment on Doped Up Dr. Seuss by smlink84	25-Dec-02/10:05 PM
i met his wife at a charity event in san diego last month. hilarious. really fucking odd bird.
Re: lovely by pink_punk_kisses87	25-Dec-02/10:03 PM
almost there, maybe add another beginning sentence for 'setting' than space, then stanza, sentence close.
Re: Raining in Dream by memorybabe	25-Dec-02/10:00 PM
well since i'm down with that italian bink, i'll be moving on...to better things and this was nice.
Re: a comment on One Country by poetandknowit	25-Dec-02/9:48 PM
keen observation.
Re: One Country by poetandknowit	25-Dec-02/9:24 PM
HOW KEEP DARK AND PATTERN OFF How keep dark and pattern that any man suffers off--at the wall, at where the hat comes out of the maroow & yawns-- how keep head up the scream & up the burial where the pattern is born-- how the leagues washing their hearts & wrung dry only to sponge back up--men smooching mirrors--blades honing-- tongue & eyelash of Sweet Thing staggering the shape by the door in the baggy shadow-- how keep dark back? Or should one bullet-forth, sleek-clothed or naked-- pierce each entity--each clock--sharpened by art or wine--how enter the needle, the cloth-- how take the pattern any man suffers and lose nothing when you rip it off. Stan Rice, Some Lamb 1975. [editor's note,by horus8]here something else for you and gardel's tango don't let your pride turn your heart to the drink on the mirror to the lines in the glass dusting hollow, i'm indifferent, you're not.
Re: Doped Up Dr. Seuss by smlink84	25-Dec-02/7:17 PM
wow. strong ending. i think you need another wait for 'an' emotional balance to the overall piece of <shit>
Re: plain by blackball	24-Dec-02/8:34 PM
you might want to think of editing this a bit more up and down, or do it dada, something...you know what i'm saying?.6m
Re: Eternal Sleep by Artificial_Sweetner	24-Dec-02/8:15 PM
jesus stacy settle down, it was only a blow dryer and some nail polish. put the KNIFE DOWN! nah go head.l
Re: Little Johnie's Jihad by <{Baba^Yaga}>	24-Dec-02/8:13 PM
no thanks.i
Re: How? Well... by RWAndersen	24-Dec-02/8:13 PM
this was like a tool show with a moral lesson on a christian cable channel. nice sentiments though. it was like playing ping pong with the lollipop kids in the wizard of oz back forth, back forth. 6.o
Re: demiurge by crin	24-Dec-02/8:09 PM
haunting. ghost-trains-rock.a
Re: mystery by jlanza	24-Dec-02/8:08 PM
take out the very last line and this would be perfect. seriously this was a pleasure to read. merry christmas.p
Re: bitterness to tenderness to endlessness by Crakyamuni	24-Dec-02/8:05 PM
Golden Q-tip award. spectacular read. bullit. poemranker must read. congrasulations. merry christmas.
Re: On the death of my Grandmother by BEBO	24-Dec-02/7:54 PM
bastard, have a 9 very grandma..
Re: Faucet's got a nasty drip. FUCK! Not again! by <{Baba^Yaga}>	24-Dec-02/7:52 PM
hate when that happens.l
Re: House of the Risen Son by livingcanvas	24-Dec-02/7:52 PM
rising twit.
Re: corners by rockinindividual	24-Dec-02/7:48 PM
fixed.i
Re: Rewrite of a goof poem. by INTRANSIT	24-Dec-02/6:00 PM
yuel tide cheer!!