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Eternal Sleep (Free verse) by Artificial_Sweetner
You don't know what it's like to feel like this. So much pain, I can't explain, I don't want it no more! Suicides the devils kiss veins are there I can't miss. Looking at the knife, Ready to risk my life, I swear i will do it! But there's the rope is it my only hope? Tie the knot, Hands burning hot, I need my relaese My life's for sale I cannot fail! To end this hell Lifes never been swell, Aint no turning back. My heart beets sped soon I'll be dead. Anticipations high, The end is nigh I'm ready for my eternal sleep. by Stacey Jones

Up the ladder: Tin Can Longings
Down the ladder: Symbol Of Love

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6363637
Weighted score: 3.8181818
Overall Rank: 13484
Posted: September 16, 2002 3:09 PM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2002 3:09 PM PDT
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Comments:
[0] god'swife @ 209.178.176.217 | 16-Sep-02/8:49 PM | Reply
"lifes never been swell" gets a 0 and destroys all hope.
[0] Tintagiles @ 142.166.239.207 | 30-Oct-02/8:41 PM | Reply
Die then, damn you! Die! Why is it taking you so long? Don't you even know how to tie a proper noose?
[4] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 24-Dec-02/8:15 PM | Reply
jesus stacy settle down, it was only a blow dryer and some nail polish. put the KNIFE DOWN! nah go head.l
[n/a] aamir_trichy @ 203.129.195.149 | 23-Feb-06/3:57 AM | Reply
its nice....are u still hanging in????
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