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Eternal Sleep (Free verse) by Artificial_Sweetner
You don't know what it's like to feel like this.
So much pain,
I can't explain,
I don't want it no more!
Suicides the devils kiss veins are there I can't miss.
Looking at the knife,
Ready to risk my life,
I swear i will do it!
But there's the rope is it my only hope?
Tie the knot,
Hands burning hot,
I need my relaese
My life's for sale I cannot fail!
To end this hell
Lifes never been swell,
Aint no turning back.
My heart beets sped soon I'll be dead.
Anticipations high,
The end is nigh
I'm ready for my eternal sleep.
by
Stacey
Jones
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6363637
Weighted score: 3.8181818
Overall Rank: 13489
Posted: September 16, 2002 3:09 PM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2002 3:09 PM PDT
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