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Eternal Sleep (Free verse) by Artificial_Sweetner

You don't know what it's like to feel like this. So much pain, I can't explain, I don't want it no more! Suicides the devils kiss veins are there I can't miss. Looking at the knife, Ready to risk my life, I swear i will do it! But there's the rope is it my only hope? Tie the knot, Hands burning hot, I need my relaese My life's for sale I cannot fail! To end this hell Lifes never been swell, Aint no turning back. My heart beets sped soon I'll be dead. Anticipations high, The end is nigh I'm ready for my eternal sleep. by Stacey Jones

Tintagiles 30-Oct-02/8:41 PM
Die then, damn you! Die! Why is it taking you so long? Don't you even know how to tie a proper noose?




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