Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit	28-Dec-02/8:51 PM
one of the ten best poems on this site. hands down. if not, than the best in the subject it deals upon.
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	28-Dec-02/8:46 PM
challenge for the actor, or respect?
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	28-Dec-02/6:58 PM
now that's just plain cheating, and you already knew that my highschool's sweethearts name was michelle, so you're disqualified for entrapment.
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	28-Dec-02/6:25 PM
well kind of, she just sort of came in and and mumbled and and smoked and critiqued performances..she smokes like a chimney..clues aye ? do i know you physically? i would of guessed you were z, settle, or p&k, but then again i can think of a load of my friends that would get off on doing shit like this to me also. just to talk to me these days, because see, i only communicate with the outside world lately via poemranker..i'm mentally ill. pretty soon this is how i'll shop and pay my bills...i'm working on a program in a program with nentwined.
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	28-Dec-02/6:04 PM
speaking of uta hagen, we both trained under her. get it now?
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	28-Dec-02/6:03 PM
you're forgetting billy bob too, but 'dog star', and 'dennis quaid' and the sharks aren't bad compared to the others.
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	28-Dec-02/5:58 PM
exactly.
Re: Mountain Ash, Mid Glamorgan by Nicholas Jones	28-Dec-02/5:57 PM
beautiful.
Re: Maria by Nicholas Monson	28-Dec-02/3:23 PM
(whom to that) the woman and the whom don't work well off of eachother in the last line. still a pleasant, and stirring poem to say the least.r
Re: plain by blackball	28-Dec-02/12:21 PM
the edit still needs to be cleaned up, but i think you get the point.
Re: plain by blackball	28-Dec-02/12:18 PM
sure, i'd love to..'dada', (i don't know if i'm spelling it correctly), is poetry in a artistic shape that works on maby levels within the readers psyche, but i can give you a better example. a poem i wrote called hey, shut up and cut my grass. z wrote one shaped like a penis..but i don't think that dada is even necisarily applicable to this poetic situation, let me do an edit, try this. i was left standing, by myself holding hands with the air, the bleak moon stared down upon me and seeing that i was a solitary figure, stood aside and let me be. I watched slowly as days went by, fluttering past at an alarming rate. my life is going by too, i'm noticing nothing but you, indirect emotion lingering on your breath you didn't know what to say so you didn't say anything.a
Re: cars by mogwai	27-Dec-02/5:53 PM
no circumlocution here. tidy and real.
Re: first words by decadentlaurel	27-Dec-02/5:51 PM
shouldn't this be final thouhts?
Re: You Win by ritz1605	27-Dec-02/5:45 PM
pervert.n
Re: im playing basketball by rockinindividual	27-Dec-02/5:41 PM
this is all second act. no first or third? it needs more arc. set up your anger more, so that we know why you are mad, exactly, and more of the process you took to expose that anger and fear in order to cure it..beyond just the basketball..that's only a third of the solution. where is the other two thirds? good first draft though. here's a seven.
Re: dps 2 - new ver. by decadentlaurel	27-Dec-02/5:28 PM
very romantic and surreal. captivating visuals. a wonderful poem.e
Re: a comment on The primates fate (chrystal ball foot switch) by Bachus	26-Dec-02/4:39 PM
you get exceedingly funnier by the millisecond. care for a whiff of snuff. I just had it imported from tasmania. i also have cuban cigars, FRESH....of course. if you'd like one i'll summon my butler with the cognac tray.
Re: pragmatic bastard! by skaskowski	26-Dec-02/3:36 PM
close.h
Re: it sounds like dying but tastes like living. by skaskowski	26-Dec-02/3:25 PM
fucking sheer spoon fed brilliance, and you're right, and i'll probably never be, but you're mine. i love your poetry. i could read it all day every day, and i do. i love you. more than the rocks that i was, or the fences i paint more than the [horse] more than the [sky net] your pen is a neon maniac blue. your stroll a hijack 'platinum' band that fits and squeezes. i'm just a handprint. caved.e
Re: Oh my gosh what was that? by ==Doylum	26-Dec-02/3:19 PM
your confessional is lacking pyrgates and enbrowning, you have no prawnes...and worst of aLL NO POOP DECK.therefore, you leave me no choice, but to offer you the plank complete with corn and whole peanuts. also we have a plank that comes in wood grain, hangover black and sesame seed. enjoy.r