Re: the play by famenglory	1-Jan-03/6:25 PM
"orsmiles on thier" before you attempt to get crafty nb you should, perhaps. spell check.
Re: Forgotten by famenglory	1-Jan-03/6:18 PM
"Here's a secret, as the hourglass turns, you don't get any younger"you're kidding? nice secret, by the way you are really on a role now..here let me help you out.0 why? because you're metaphoric, and genuine.t
Re: The Birds by lunar	1-Jan-03/6:00 PM
what? no beak bending?
Re: Track.... by Topaz Servias	1-Jan-03/5:56 PM
jesus christ.??
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	30-Dec-02/4:47 PM
Yeah. your college degree really shows here, and it also shows in your living methods and environment (furnitureless apartment in the getto) i make no excuses for my actions. what's your excuse? writing a script? with me as a character refference? sounds like a flop. i hope you have a good lawyer, my clients have enough money to protect themselves against star fucking leeches like yourself. i, on the other hand am flattered by your project. once again, i specify. Good fucking luck. lolipop, and yes you're a smart one. we can tell. i am a lowly fag, and you are a sexy brain, with a four year business degree(using it well i might add) do you mention that during your auditions? it might help, also mention your script..every business major should write one in their 'business' down time. you're not telling these good listeners here anything they already don't know..smarter than me? don't forget. i've met you.ha ..ha hab haa ha ha..you can barely open your mouth with out sounding like a fish monger..you have terrible taste, no money, no life, and it's only a matter of weeks before this town finally sends you back home with your tail tucked. once again i wish you the best. sorry it didn't work out. by the way. what did my cock taste like? big fat hairy gay jew..that's right. cheers.
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	30-Dec-02/4:01 PM
What ever helps you sleep at night, low? do you even know what low is? you're bottomless. you know damn well the amount of friction you and i brought into my home, and you also know damn well what you said to nadine and when you said it. karma biting me in the ass? when has it stopped? i would appreciate it if in the future. you would quit coming back to my poem for memories. and to say you never spoke to her is a blatant lie. take your low self esteem and mediocre poetry and soap opera outbursts to your pile of scribbles could you..this poem you're writing underneath..is one of my favorites old and expressive..your filth and jealousy below it is lessening it so scramsky..you're boring and bitter.r
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	30-Dec-02/12:53 PM
that is a gret song by the way, and an incredible album.
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	30-Dec-02/12:50 PM
yes. i will speak with you more. off air.
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	30-Dec-02/11:55 AM
yeah. i need all the help i can get. i'm working through more guilt currently than any one person should be aloud to wade through in one life time. Good story material, bad sleep agents. my increasing awareness is drying it all out, i'm starting to feel lighter, but i guess it takes time, so i'm going up north to sky tonight and tomorrow. mountains are natural healing structures. i should be okay. thanks again.
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	30-Dec-02/2:43 AM
Down time. Quiet time. What people normally use the end of their year for. I have alot of responsiblity ahead of me this year, and i need my focus. You know i think you're great, and fun to be with, but i need to conscentrate more on my career, and less on my abilty to win my mother back. My last hurdles before i turn thirty in two years should be productive towards my creative needs and my family. Not being selfish with drugs, and succulent night caps. I have to choose my life and family, or the other. Sadly, you land in the other. I have been lying to myself about love, poetry, art and the need for my pain and loneliness to accompany that. You were dragged into my nightmare late, and thankfully so. before i knocked you up, or hurt those close to me with my selfishness. I'm sorry. You're free, and so am i. My bad dreaming ends now. I don't want to hurt myself or others anymore. Don't you get it. i've been sick for ten years. Sick of me. i live through others. Their interpretatations of me and what i mean to them. it's un-fucking-healthy. bad magic. It ends here. I'm sorry. i've lived likr rimbaud..now i need to just be jeremi. he's not so bad. i even have forgotten what i set out to prove with my rebellious revolution when i got out of prison and started doing drugs to begin with. it was all a selfish. egotistical lie, and i bit into it hook line sinker, slept with it, ate it, breathed it, but no more. i'm getting more comfortable being alone with myself these days. i'm regaining my will power, and instead of the heroin and the hot virgin..i'm going to choose my son, and my boston market girlfriend instead. See i'm not ashamed of who or what i am anymore. my family is giving me their support and love i need hands down, no questions asked. to help me with my drinking and drugs and whoring, and i think they finally deserve my attention and focus. For the love of christ..i deserve it and so do they, and you do too. Someone more available to you and your needs. It's night and day, so clear in front of me can't you see it. the future, i don't have to be miserable to perform or write. i don't need impressionable hotties telling me what i want to hear. i need to listen to myself, and grow the fuck up. and that's exactly what i'm doing.n
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	30-Dec-02/2:19 AM
thanks.
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	30-Dec-02/2:17 AM
Now you have. you can reverse the effects with a Deepak Chopra enima and a danish. Church works miracles too i've heard, and the patrons can be more supportive of your intimate needs. I, as you may already know, am uninterested by it all. A seal, only can be thrown so many times by an orca before the inevitable listlessness.w
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	30-Dec-02/2:05 AM
i don't think that's a very appropriate question mr. k. As a peer, and a friend (outside of our high art fan rousing) let's not instigate this one..it's not good karma. i'm already coming off of a bad year..i really don't feel like reliving it. trust me. thanks.y
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	30-Dec-02/2:00 AM
i don't have nothing against you. Don't be dramatic, and must you and shawn follow me into my escape world too. I use, and enjoy poemranker, as a writing forum, and it's my latest creative outlet for the last 4 to 5 months. Not to deal with the artery clogging coagulates that parallel my pathetic hollywood existence in my fantasty world too. I might be a snake, but at least i'm aware of what can and can't swallow. Must i turn around and find this pointless high school clique mentality everywhere? Get over it. Write poems, or shut the fuck up. Here's a scenario, i don't really see us having a future together. And the note passing is a little pathetic. When a person doesn't pick up the phone to call, or answer that usually is a pretty good indicater of loss of interest. Nothing against you, but i'm intuative enough to see a psycho bubbling over a mile away, and you sweetheart are a text book nut case. my advice to you would be put tony robbins down, and get some meds. also, the best thing that could happen is p&k corresponding with you. Two birds, one stone.
Re: Instantly by Quarton	29-Dec-02/6:26 PM
boing.
Re: Mangled by Carvaceous	29-Dec-02/3:49 PM
malchovich..malchovich..malchovich.p
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	28-Dec-02/10:45 PM
ah, sleeping with my nemisis now aye..you're a bad bulgarian, but you can't make me jealous..if i couldn't it bag the cherries, no one can..well, except for herman your amazing glow in the dark harry poker wand'.
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	28-Dec-02/10:41 PM
yeah, you are. she's not really fat, unless she got depressed cuz i don't let her give me blue balls anymore and started a chocodile wrapper collection. what's the job for ornella? sag or no? are you gonna let your fish town accent soak through..god that mouth..sweet jesu, remember that time you blew me? lol. you are a professional testicle tamer...seduce any other writers lately? i can tell...you are still craving 'kid greek the sleek'. don't worry i've see your plumbing, and i could never forget copper elbows that sweat like that. by the way, liked your daddy poem..i didn't know you could write...i guess occasionally stones do levitate.
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	28-Dec-02/10:33 PM
yeah the mullet sight was pretty damn clever. for i minute i thought i was going to see a photo shopped picture of me in the rat tail section. i was kind of concerned.
Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	28-Dec-02/9:06 PM
i'm preparing for the first of the year (rent) and feeling acutely aggoraphobic. sorry. figured that was you. Also, i'm moody and unsocial. Why? miss me. Shawn came by today whacky as ever. If he knew who you were he'd die. ha haha..funny shit. and i saw the two towers last night, you know a movie blows chunks when the acting award should go to the computer generated bad guy. what are you doing at home tonight? sopranos are on.