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Mangled (Free verse) by Carvaceous
Step away, one small print away
My heart tears, struggles
Leave me gasping for air
Some sweet release of warm embrace
A touch behind my ear
I quiver but step away again
yet again
Behold! Brave world I'm running
Push me with all your might
I'm tempted, so tempted to stay
wrapped
around and again some poor fools finger
Ah, I can't play puppet.
Puppeteer is vile.
Where's my medium?
Cruel world. No space for expansion
I can't fly out this window
only to be caged once again.
Behind bars of sweet words that leave
me bitter, after such a high
Oh what a high!
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.142857
Weighted score: 4.769479
Overall Rank: 11394
Posted: December 29, 2002 11:02 AM PST; Last modified: December 29, 2002 11:02 AM PST
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