Mangled

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Dec 2002 · 5 comments

Step away, one small print away My heart tears, struggles Leave me gasping for air Some sweet release of warm embrace A touch behind my ear I quiver but step away again yet again Behold! Brave world I'm running Push me with all your might I'm tempted, so tempted to stay wrapped around and again some poor fools finger Ah, I can't play puppet. Puppeteer is vile. Where's my medium? Cruel world. No space for expansion I can't fly out this window only to be caged once again. Behind bars of sweet words that leave me bitter, after such a high Oh what a high!

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[9] Topaz Servias 29-Dec-02/3:35 PM Reply

A very interesting allusion, does it pertain to a memory?

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Topaz Servias 29-Dec-02/4:25 PM Reply

What an amazingly unpretentious comment! Great use of the words 'allusion' and 'pertain'! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

[n/a] Carvaceous › Topaz Servias 29-Dec-02/7:48 PM Reply

Actually yes it does.

[8] horus8 29-Dec-02/3:49 PM Reply

malchovich..malchovich..malchovich.p

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 29-Dec-02/4:22 PM Reply

Puppeteer *IS* vile