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Free verse № 31695

Garden of confusion

by Sugarbbybuttrfly

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Dec 2002 · 2 comments

Are your feelings still the same Does your love still remain Your all I know, your all I need You took my heart and planted your seed Let me know what you think I'm getting lost and starting to sink Falling apart at the seams Am i still in your dreams Take my hand and let me know Should I let this flower grow

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[8] INTRANSIT 24-Dec-02/9:46 AM Reply
Frustrated. Good. Dangerous. Last line needs a (?).
[6] <~> 24-Dec-02/6:58 PM Reply
good thing he didn't take your womb too. then you'd be in serious shit.