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Garden of confusion (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly Are your feelings still the same
Does your love still remain
Your all I know, your all I need
You took my heart and planted your seed
Let me know what you think
I'm getting lost and starting to sink
Falling apart at the seams
Am i still in your dreams
Take my hand and let me know
Should I let this flower grow
Up the ladder:
Splendid Discovery
Down the ladder:
Mangled
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Posted: December 24, 2002 2:48 AM PST; Last modified: December 24, 2002 2:48 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.769479 Overall Rank: 11394 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.46
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24-Dec-02/9:46 AM
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Frustrated. Good. Dangerous. Last line needs a (?).
good thing he didn't take your womb too. then you'd be in serious shit.
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