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Garden of confusion (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly

Are your feelings still the same Does your love still remain Your all I know, your all I need You took my heart and planted your seed Let me know what you think I'm getting lost and starting to sink Falling apart at the seams Am i still in your dreams Take my hand and let me know Should I let this flower grow

INTRANSIT 24-Dec-02/9:46 AM
Frustrated. Good. Dangerous. Last line needs a (?).




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