| Re: joyriding by Bill Z Bub |
5-Jan-03/7:17 PM |
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3, i have to go work now. thanks for earlier.
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| Re: Multiplicity the Hallucination by vulcan |
5-Jan-03/12:07 AM |
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this is good, but are you fuckin getting lippy? have a 9 for both lips.
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| Re: a comment on The poemranker desk by lunar |
4-Jan-03/6:12 PM |
what does a postcard consist of? baby arms or dildos?
i second that notion and raise you a trained jack ass.??
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| Re: The poemranker desk by lunar |
4-Jan-03/6:08 PM |
a true cross section, very original.
i gave you the blue vote a second ago.s
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| Re: a comment on She Seeks To Know Me by newdawnfades |
4-Jan-03/5:26 PM |
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i just noticed your name was chris, so i believe your argument is accurate. cheers.s
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| Re: a comment on She Seeks To Know Me by newdawnfades |
4-Jan-03/5:23 PM |
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not really because of your use of the word "She" unless she is you, then i totally understand what your saying. Either way, go with what you feel works for you. you're welcome. cheers. thanks again.s
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| Re: a comment on Hewed by horus8 |
4-Jan-03/4:44 PM |
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thank you, i admire you for saying that. There are invisible lines that can and can't be crossed.It's important to recognize them and fight for what you believe in, even if some people's perspectives witnessing it feel you're being hypocrite with your actions or needs. In your mind there is a bell that goes ohh always, right, wrong, good, bad. Don't worry about who's right or wrong (i'm right what she did, was columbine trust me) let me worry about that..and learn a lesson from this, some people will love you to death.e
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| Re: IRONSHOE by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
3-Jan-03/5:38 AM |
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a genuflect, just this once, but no more...i'm watching how, and i am quick to absorb, but don't be a dick..at least tell me if i do it right beyond fucking papasmurf..i value your opinion, and well there is our blatant homosexuality in question here, and probably Settles ward robe for years to come...let's come together...for our children..and for gay lawyers and detectives and firepeople the world over (but, i will restate we really aren't gay, we're just open ended, i mean minded, sorry) ummwhere was i, ah yes, could you ask settle to..return my but marauder 2000..he borrows without asking, or taking it's special hand towel clip, and we both know that hand towels are thee most important thing in a hitchikers bag. thanks..ah..perry mason, never really did it for me, but i do like him better in his smooth cheeked earlier work.
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| Re: Dust by Caducus |
3-Jan-03/5:22 AM |
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congrats on the top fifteen, you never told me you studied politics? just joshing. here's something to keep you there longer.
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| Re: michael jackson's other glove by bondjedi |
3-Jan-03/5:12 AM |
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when doves cry? or when carmen electra devulges that her and prince actually changed penises and identitys, just remember alex p keaton was a damn smart republican, just short.
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| Re: Just clubbing fur seals by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
3-Jan-03/3:06 AM |
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hey da. did i do this right? i'm unsure.
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| Re: The dance by purplestain |
3-Jan-03/1:42 AM |
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sorry, i thought you were a girl i new from butterfield, minn. if you can believe that....strong poem, simple, and see how well it worked! a universal theme and feel to it, i wouldn't be suprised if more people responded to this the way i did. have an eight.
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| Re: a comment on Milk & Honey with a touch of PCP <the dead cat edit> by horus8 |
2-Jan-03/3:37 PM |
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ready for the dead cat edit? here it comes.??
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| Re: Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger |
2-Jan-03/3:09 PM |
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and whoever gavev this a zero, shouuld immeiately go wash their mouth out with soup, that's right...i said soup. motherfucker, sorry for the french, but this poem does not deserve a zero, or anything less than a six, and i'll prove that. watch.a
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| Re: Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger |
2-Jan-03/3:05 PM |
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yes. i do. this is a great and grand poem. golden que tip. 10.
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| Re: a comment on Hewed by horus8 |
2-Jan-03/1:51 PM |
yes, that's usually how i write, and why i need a good editor...ahh, my mother..did me dirty...my father, yeah..poor guy, ummm thanks for the que tip, and the ten..i do give a fuck, man, poetry is my life..it allows me an honest release without the filters and restraints of a comfort zone..how's your project coming along..i'm still waiting for your synopsis. are you still putting the play on? i just want to let you know. that i might come across as a monster, because i am, but i have sensibility and an unmeasurable love for 'life', and people who i trust..if i can trust you, i'll carry you around the world on my back and give you everything i have to give, but the problem with that is people take and take and take until, alas, there is no back to carry with
any longer..i feel that i can trust you, can i? if so...i will help you complete your project in an affordable, time efficient manner that will leave them breathless...send me your idea, we'll work from there.s
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| Re: unsent by Bill Z Bub |
1-Jan-03/7:05 PM |
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an unsent letter?GOLDEN Q-TIP AWARD...A POEMRANKER MUST READ..wonder no longer.@
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| Re: The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~> |
1-Jan-03/6:56 PM |
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did you sell me out the other day to that newbie?t
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| Re: She Seeks To Know Me by newdawnfades |
1-Jan-03/6:48 PM |
"and lost like tears in rain." try
lost as my tears in her rain.
"through my body, in to my soul." how about 'into instead of in to...?a
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| Re: a comment on My Son is...a prayer. by horus8 |
1-Jan-03/6:33 PM |
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