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cars (Free verse) by mogwai if i turn over
against the wall
then i can barely hear the traffic at all
and i can imagine
you're still here.
Up the ladder:
Nicotine Ruse
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Broken Bridges
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Posted: September 17, 2002 6:22 PM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2002 6:22 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.865529 Overall Rank: 10318 Comments:
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Christof @ 195.172.133.226
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18-Sep-02/7:33 AM
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This is sweet.
no circumlocution here. tidy and real.
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