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Broken Bridges (Free verse) by DreamMachine
Inside myself I feel nothing but anger with hurt, Because our relationship has been charred to a crisp, And the bridge between us is condemned to be burnt, But with the slightest whisp of wind, That could break it, No matter how hard we try, I don't think we'll make it, Because this rusty old thing is reduced to dust, And as we jump up and down on it, We're only breaking our trust

Up the ladder: cars
Down the ladder: Tiger

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.865529
Overall Rank: 10314
Posted: September 28, 2002 4:11 PM PDT; Last modified: September 28, 2002 4:11 PM PDT
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