regarding some deleted poem...	30-Nov-02/2:28 PM
ah ha! that was just what i needed.wasn't it on this weekend...did you just get done watching it? 10.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Dec-02/12:30 AM
boing. i figure you want this to go south so heres dantes score card..0. your welcome..love scheszwa, shezswa.e
Re: Live from Boise Idaho...the cads! by Bachus	1-Dec-02/4:54 PM
you are ill man, get a life.n
Re: Iced by debased	2-Dec-02/12:54 AM
two problems: title and last sentence....titles weak, because it's not a tractor beam, and it should...and that's how you should end it...with....taking out "ever will"...cuz we all know it will. and put should.w
Re: Left, Cold by Tibbs	2-Dec-02/3:01 PM
sounds like an ethiopian homonid dig...lucy's footprints.8.??
Re: Embarrassed by Goose	2-Dec-02/3:07 PM
definition 84 in the thespians hand book..
Re: The Magician by Hooman	2-Dec-02/3:44 PM
science is a tool...i would argue faith is a tool, and science is a study of natural formulas used to define what's around us and effecting us on a levels at all times.y
Re: Superhuman - Nature - Hero by royalflesh	3-Dec-02/3:46 PM
3rd stanza should be fixed...it might be better.."what?....what are you thinking?" same with third sentence in third stanza...with "your" kiss is more personable than undying...might i have touched you? then differently is the only word, last sentence...the first two stanzas are incredible..really.8.
Re: The wonderful happy relationship between two wonderful and caring people by Dark Angle	4-Dec-02/4:19 PM
finely crafted...like a deer antler pipe in the hand of a drueling lazy boy chaired drunk uncle.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Dec-02/4:23 PM
damn skippy..i would make it willow wisps to the fog, and "in" the air, because on the air makes it feel too manmade like a silly glider...great fucking ballad..my hat is off to you..pun intended. 9.
Re: flight by soccer23	4-Dec-02/4:24 PM
passe. 6.
Re: The Limerick of Dave by worldsofwar	4-Dec-02/4:26 PM
to self absorb. wow did i say that? sure did. grand funks on...gotta go. 5.
Re: Girlz by liljsmith87	4-Dec-02/4:30 PM
can i ask you a sincere question? WHAT IN THE FUCK ARE YOU BABBLING ABOUT, AND WHAT EXACTLY CONVINCED YOU SPECIFICALLY speaking, THAT ANYONE SERIOUS ABOUT WRITING WOULD GIVE A FUCK?!
Re: I Am A Poor Little Boy In The Land Of Love by sweetzephyr	4-Dec-02/4:37 PM
it was worth a shit while you were loved by another and oblivious because... but then in the last 4 or 5 sentences you bite your tail off by trying to criticize those with deep pockets...simply because anyone with half a brain understands the uselessness that accompanies the jealousy-guilt of that sentiment.6. i love the penny in the boys purse though.. nice twist..not lemonade mind you, but damn tasty still.
Re: Deep Inner Pain by razorgrin	5-Dec-02/9:03 PM
tomorrows headline.."man hijacks plane with saran wrap"!? he could use it as rope and a weapon..tie them up, then let them pick either smothering or bleeding to death..weird wild stuff. sorry about your arm and your cookies. 8.o
Re: Ode to Larkbeat Twoshoes by Nicholas Jones	6-Dec-02/5:33 PM
amazing. like speaking life into a rib.
Re: i got a really big fan by Flattop	6-Dec-02/5:36 PM
funny..the end starts to toss and turn a bit, but funny, funny shit.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Dec-02/9:50 PM
you have the wit, of a harpies tit.
Re: Impervious by heart	7-Dec-02/2:18 PM
poets who write entire books on birds are in need of thorazine.
Re: InCumBent by slipping	9-Dec-02/4:55 PM
golden q-tip award. i believe this poem to be quite impressive in every sense and idea i can possibly fathom at this moment or any moment since. Cheers! 10!e