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The Limerick of Dave (Limerick) by worldsofwar
There was a lad called Dave, Who sliped up in a church nave, He hurt his head, and was confined to bed, Finally he got a visit from Fred.
Up the ladder: red lorry yellow lorry
Down the ladder: My pimp's ceiling fan
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.0179863
Overall Rank: 13357
Posted: October 17, 2002 12:54 AM PDT; Last modified: October 17, 2002 12:54 AM PDT
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[n/a] Tom Colebrooke @ 212.219.142.161 | 17-Oct-02/12:58 AM | Reply
Good
[4] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200 | 18-Oct-02/4:30 AM | Reply
Pretty pants. If you're going to write a limerick, try and make it scan. Or else it's not a limerick, just a freaky rhyming poem.
[10] rosiebailey @ 212.219.142.161 | 4-Nov-02/4:03 AM | Reply
crazy man dat is crazy man
[0] Tascobar @ 193.130.87.54 | 15-Nov-02/4:59 AM | Reply
This may actually be the dullest, least inspired, most insipid effort I have seen to date. 0. It is actually traumatic to read more than once.
[5] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Dec-02/4:26 PM | Reply
to self absorb. wow did i say that? sure did. grand funks on...gotta go. 5.
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