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The Limerick of Dave (Limerick) by worldsofwar

There was a lad called Dave, Who sliped up in a church nave, He hurt his head, and was confined to bed, Finally he got a visit from Fred.

Tascobar 15-Nov-02/4:59 AM
This may actually be the dullest, least inspired, most insipid effort I have seen to date. 0. It is actually traumatic to read more than once.




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