poemranker ::red lorry yellow lorry by deano

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Free verse № 33992

red lorry yellow lorry

by deano

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Jan 2003 · 4 comments

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4 comments

[0] Ranger 6-Jan-03/6:01 AM Reply
Fuck off
[n/a] Bill Z Bub 6-Jan-03/6:16 AM Reply
This is the opposite of Iron Maiden singing S.T.Colerige.
"and the ship it sinks like lead into the sea"



[10] Another Bobjim?!?! 6-Jan-03/12:36 PM Reply
It deserves 0, but I give 10 to prevent it staying around in the bottem.
[0] Bobjim 8-Jan-03/3:14 AM Reply
This sucks almost as much as your mum. 0