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9-Dec-02/7:05 PM |
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i leave for twenty minutes to go to the bath house and svitz a little, and look what you've done...ah?, i think it's very expressive ewerr..i'm relly quite overwhelmed ah..let's see i enjoyed all of it..the clear channel part was funny and the end and beginning were quite crafty... the language mixes are intimate..since i'm german, columbian and greek..also it's not an ode (thank god) and it has to do with alot more than just me, so i am flattered.. i guess to be a part of it all. either that or i'm a fool to comment at all. probably both. 10..i give you this ten for content not title..he he.
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| Re: How the Mighty Fall by jdsnyd |
9-Dec-02/10:13 PM |
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this felt like conan pushing that wheel and making that huge rut with his little boy legs...but then cut too..arnold yes! 10.
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| Re: oedipus is raising a pint to me now by <~> |
10-Dec-02/9:42 AM |
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| Re: this tuesday morning by teacup |
10-Dec-02/11:56 AM |
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i think you have concrete confused with cement.???
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| Re: falling by Aggreddion |
10-Dec-02/11:57 AM |
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there is no bottom at the top.??
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| Re: Acknowledgement* by Sigh'ense... |
10-Dec-02/11:58 AM |
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| Re: uninvited guests by teacup |
10-Dec-02/12:01 PM |
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sweet water melon seeds they're everywhere!e
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10-Dec-02/12:06 PM |
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oddly dismal, yet compitent..you were right to put the italian version first. it's more potent than the english one.
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10-Dec-02/12:08 PM |
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he shouldn't of put his potty stick there. hugh?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Dec-02/6:09 PM |
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have you read the master and marguerrite? by michael bulgakov? have a ten.e
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| Re: en el tiempo que era nina by daniella |
10-Dec-02/6:14 PM |
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i have to agree wth d.a and gw (we were giggling about it while she was at my house just now) on this one, both of your attempts at spanish are umm well, whatever. better luck next time. have an eight for christmas.e
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| Re: Untitled by ==Doylum |
10-Dec-02/6:25 PM |
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10-Dec-02/6:30 PM |
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my audition went well. better than i expected. whether i get it or not i'll sleep good tonight.h
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| Re: 68 by darby pyn |
10-Dec-02/6:36 PM |
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beautifull, a hole in one, might be better if you refer to coke by its street name 'girl'. get some 'girl'.
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10-Dec-02/6:38 PM |
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an inner jubilee that has yet to touch my extremities..
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| Re: Jacaranda by David |
10-Dec-02/6:40 PM |
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cute. on st. patricks for lasses.t
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| Re: Jacaranda by David |
10-Dec-02/6:42 PM |
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| Re: Check Yourself by INTRANSIT |
10-Dec-02/6:48 PM |
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don't be afraid to suck the laST sentence into the last stanza it fits fine. no osterization needed..
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10-Dec-02/6:50 PM |
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the lone strangeling hath spaken! 10.t
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| Re: just plain orange by New Life Drug |
10-Dec-02/8:50 PM |
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i miss orange juilius' somethin fierce and a double double with cheese (monster style) with grilled onions...like, to go with dude. big time.l
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