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just plain orange (Free verse) by New Life Drug
Inviting calm orange It fills the background like candy to my eye As a drift slowly I see the orange of 1,000 orchards and feel heat rays from upon the skies settling on my smoothe skin So nestled with the space around me Oranje, the color of freedom Still sunsets and fragrant fruit Days of sleeping beneath somber warmth It echos within my soul Deep down a steamy fuzzy orange Dormant oils and smells come to life as I relax They tingle, the orange spritz The pure color in tone to my life A sigh of relief For it is orange, and it has come to take thee away Sweet conjure of taste and bright memories of a child's Playing softly and foggy, the orange cascades to my fingertips I escape in all that is orange and I am in the quiet serenity forever and ever

Up the ladder: Embarrassed
Down the ladder: A trap door for the moat

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7584
Posted: December 10, 2002 7:01 PM PST; Last modified: December 10, 2002 7:01 PM PST
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[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Dec-02/8:50 PM | Reply
i miss orange juilius' somethin fierce and a double double with cheese (monster style) with grilled onions...like, to go with dude. big time.l
[8] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 11-Dec-02/10:03 AM | Reply
J-a-c-k-p-o-t ! *8
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