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Free verse № 29566

just plain orange

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Dec 2002 · 2 comments

Inviting calm orange It fills the background like candy to my eye As a drift slowly I see the orange of 1,000 orchards and feel heat rays from upon the skies settling on my smoothe skin So nestled with the space around me Oranje, the color of freedom Still sunsets and fragrant fruit Days of sleeping beneath somber warmth It echos within my soul Deep down a steamy fuzzy orange Dormant oils and smells come to life as I relax They tingle, the orange spritz The pure color in tone to my life A sigh of relief For it is orange, and it has come to take thee away Sweet conjure of taste and bright memories of a child's Playing softly and foggy, the orange cascades to my fingertips I escape in all that is orange and I am in the quiet serenity forever and ever

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[8] horus8 10-Dec-02/8:50 PM Reply
i miss orange juilius' somethin fierce and a double double with cheese (monster style) with grilled onions...like, to go with dude. big time.l
[8] Caducus 11-Dec-02/10:03 AM Reply
J-a-c-k-p-o-t ! *8