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Embarrassed (Free verse) by Goose
My heart is beating faster now I can't seem to breathe the cold sweat on my skin makes the moment sink in all I want is to make myself small find a corner to cow down and pray I won't be found

Up the ladder: i am genius personified
Down the ladder: just plain orange

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7580
Posted: December 2, 2002 2:58 PM PST; Last modified: December 2, 2002 2:58 PM PST
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[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 2-Dec-02/3:07 PM | Reply
definition 84 in the thespians hand book..
[7] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 3-Dec-02/2:00 AM | Reply
The goose has layed a golden egg !
Well done indeed BUT.........
check line 6, its cower you want now cow, or it sounds like line dancing for cows.
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