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Embarrassed

Member since 2002 · Posted 2 Dec 2002 · 2 comments

My heart is beating faster now I can't seem to breathe the cold sweat on my skin makes the moment sink in all I want is to make myself small find a corner to cow down and pray I won't be found

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[7] horus8 2-Dec-02/3:07 PM Reply
definition 84 in the thespians hand book..
[7] Caducus 3-Dec-02/2:00 AM Reply
The goose has layed a golden egg !
Well done indeed BUT.........
check line 6, its cower you want now cow, or it sounds like line dancing for cows.