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Embarrassed
(
Free verse
) by
Goose
My heart is beating faster now I can't seem to breathe the cold sweat on my skin makes the moment sink in all I want is to make myself small find a corner to cow down and pray I won't be found
Caducus
3-Dec-02/2:00 AM
The goose has layed a golden egg !
Well done indeed BUT.........
check line 6, its cower you want now cow, or it sounds like line dancing for cows.
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