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Embarrassed (Free verse) by Goose

My heart is beating faster now I can't seem to breathe the cold sweat on my skin makes the moment sink in all I want is to make myself small find a corner to cow down and pray I won't be found

Caducus 3-Dec-02/2:00 AM
The goose has layed a golden egg !
Well done indeed BUT.........
check line 6, its cower you want now cow, or it sounds like line dancing for cows.




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