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10-Dec-02/9:34 PM |
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this is splendid, but perhaps i am a bit over-read on the crow,shadow, winter, river..topics of late. then again, i do comment on alot of poetry.
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| Re: When Im Gone by New Life Drug |
10-Dec-02/9:44 PM |
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stop at winter air, than say open my shutters for the sun.also, try to compromise the integrity of some of your adjectives...think neutral but crisp and light like foil, a taoist with telepathic abilities.t
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| Re: Sparks, until Sunvalley. by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
11-Dec-02/2:55 PM |
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i'll put your opinion right next to my guitar pick collection. To be lost in the dulling colors and teeth marks. here let me help you out, i'll give myself a zero and take your critic to my eyebrows like a straight-razor cuz that's how fucking much i care about what you think mr. poetry.
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| Re: going by slipping |
11-Dec-02/3:26 PM |
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| Re: On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit |
11-Dec-02/4:37 PM |
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first off, it's too ummm confessional.
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| Re: while you are away on the islands by poetandknowit |
11-Dec-02/4:45 PM |
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secondly,the biggest confessional of all time...here i'm leaving this fruit cake for the holidays at your altar..it's my aunts recipe.one dash miles bettween us, a sprinkle of endless sea..steeped in the sun for a week with a pinch of photograph in wallet. vuala 'disinfranchised confessional poetry that's not confessional but still true with just a tinge of metaphorical middle america dustings <the babbit special> enjoy children it goes with coffee and scones along with carolers and snow drifts.t
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| Re: father Worked Nights by poetandknowit |
11-Dec-02/4:53 PM |
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is it...could it be?...no it couldn't!, but yes..once again 'not confessionally confessional poetry', by none other than..? you got it mr. poetry. not just any normal poem boys and girls but a riveting american staple that you to can purchase at wallmart in the form of a taxidermied mallard with a brass enscribed plaque. thanks uncle charlie! i'll put it right next to the rocket i built last week...say,,will you fire her off with my at the play ground this afternoon uncle charlie..that'd be swell.l
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| Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit |
11-Dec-02/5:15 PM |
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lo and behold, yet again, by confessing children, but the same time not really confessing you achieve the unachievable. 24 tens, from a place where apparently the confessional works by not actually working. hooray. i'm impressed.
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| Re: Work by poetandknowit |
11-Dec-02/5:23 PM |
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round and round, where we stop nobody knows.oh yeah... at a brief confessional, but look again is it really? yes. but notice how well it's blended into the magic plum sauce.o
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11-Dec-02/5:38 PM |
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NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how will i raise the twins?e
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11-Dec-02/7:26 PM |
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how did you know i was wearing orange? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! the curtains...ah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Re: Premarital Sex (Zombie Fantasy) by Sigh'ense... |
11-Dec-02/7:29 PM |
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i would end after ejaculated, dal.n
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| Re: THE MISSING HEART by Prince of Void |
11-Dec-02/7:31 PM |
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tron and birdes are fun and beys? well what can i says? they are always fabulous with portebellos and bacon.b
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| Re: Danse by Limness |
11-Dec-02/7:33 PM |
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| Re: A hard life by INTRANSIT |
11-Dec-02/7:34 PM |
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possibly, holding more meaning than an incubus song.d
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| Re: Europeans shouldn't mess with Ronald McDonald because one day he will rule their pathetic "continent" by bondjedi |
11-Dec-02/7:40 PM |
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thank god the title isn't better than the haiku, and i thought he did already. they shold have a mutton burger called the mcbleet. the second line is humorous. what kind of vreature is the grimace? exactly.r
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12-Dec-02/12:38 PM |
1) i don't blue vote
2) i don't call my friends
so that they might blue vote for me
3) i green vote
4) the difference between a ten and a zero to me is nine other numbers
5)you will find i've giving darkangel as many low blasts as high
6)also, i don't care.
7)reallyd
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| Re: trapoide by Angel_of_fait |
12-Dec-02/12:41 PM |
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HA! ^%^^&$^&(*^ HA! ARGHHHHH!
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| Re: just like the jagged dagger by Angel_of_fait |
12-Dec-02/12:44 PM |
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the angels must die whether they are angels of fit or fate...lit or lite. they must BURN!!r
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| Re: No name. by Plasticgirlwithgun |
13-Dec-02/10:17 PM |
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i want you to know that when i give her a good shove...well..i think of you. every time actually.v
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