| Re: opposition by kiki |
14-Dec-02/3:56 PM |
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when i was younger the rats ate my board game collection.;
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| Re: the pot collected water when it hid us from the rain by kiki |
14-Dec-02/4:01 PM |
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i believe this poem to be flattering and quite accurate, it wins A GOLDEN Q TIP AWARD FOR REMINDING ME..WELL OF ME. NOT THAT THAT'S HARD TO DO, BUT IMPOSSIBLE AT THIS POINT IN TIME enjoy...10!T
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| Re: it was red by kiki |
14-Dec-02/4:26 PM |
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also very well controled. the sense of restraint and it leaves the reader with a feeling of an involved evolution with the author.e
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| Re: BITTER AND TWISTED by HANCEKW |
14-Dec-02/4:32 PM |
pretty much 75% of all american children born between 1970 and 1995.
there's always the game show channel.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
14-Dec-02/4:35 PM |
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it looks like a golf tee.e
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| Re: Roll the dice (revised) by Katie |
14-Dec-02/4:40 PM |
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i too, want to thank you miggy, for helping me, help myself. i can date again without anti-venom.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
14-Dec-02/6:40 PM |
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rage should be gauged, lab should be thrusts. wealth should be stealthiered. neck should be smecklesoda..and the title should be 'the staff of herpes simplux dias' it should start slower, end faster, have leaf blowers and sand blasters..and there should be more pain, blame, sediment, stool, boric acid, and of course...much more, i would go even further and insert a sploch of passion, and maybe more stimulating images...by the way..the poem is shit, congradulations. i gave you a two in case you need to take the bus home.n
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| Re: Death's Awaiting by The_Shadows_Smile |
14-Dec-02/7:09 PM |
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| Re: Mother by blkarak |
15-Dec-02/2:26 PM |
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never..it's only just begun. GOLDEN Q-TIP AWARD FOR MOTHER'S SQUATTING EVERYWHERE YOUR NEGLECT WILL BE MET WITH A RAZOR SIDED FRISBEE. if only birth control had worked to begin with i still could be backstroking with the porpoises on planet gt-21. have a 10. for making my laugh.N
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Dec-02/8:17 PM |
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i don't have to blue vote real poems down in futile pimple riddled retaliation. i will stand here call it shit, and green vote(again)it right fucking in front of you. flush. merry christmas Katie here's some advice most young poets completely skip...read more poetry, don't assume you and your friends have a god given gift (like the scholar of latin america, mallard hunter, who does) and therefore can by-pass that part (cuz he didn't)..READ MORE REAL POETRY!READ MORE POETRY.. here are some names for you okay sweetheart; sylvia plath, a. sexton..dickinson. stan rice, arthur rimbaud . daniel higgs. da. levy. jim chandler. garcia lorca. henry miller. david lerner. alan kaufman. hank hyena....whatever right..keep on writing along making me pray for asteroids and more highschool shootings..where's calvetti when we need a good seventeen year old writer pumping real highschool poems out. exactly out to lunch.
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| Re: fa11ing by Bill Z Bub |
15-Dec-02/9:48 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Dec-02/12:46 AM |
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line ten is a bowl of nuts and a drunk great grandma crackin-em for you ...Art+politics=power! power!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dc is better than ac just ask tesla.s
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16-Dec-02/1:01 AM |
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mad magazine look out. i've wept in my curry. no the curry leaks from me..
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| Re: Cecelia by Nicholas Monson |
16-Dec-02/5:16 PM |
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enticing and full of 'an' humble understanding of nature and love. but can you pass a grape without digesting it..now that..in that..for that..is the meaning of life and love...looking good doing it also helps alot too..
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16-Dec-02/6:19 PM |
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ms. diaz just drove by me and dave outside letting butch piss..i think she was checking up on mr. leto. cuz she went by twice.i see her daily now for my walks. i love her man.love! i tell you..because yes, yes..just thirty more seconds to mars..we can only pray for the tidal wave to be bigger than godzilla and grab our knees and hold our nose..twenty bucks says the gangs of new york does a 'bringing out the dead'..i wager it makes 100 million in 21 weeks, but sucks anyway..what's your take? i'm just getting ready to cook msome steaks, with spanish rice and green beans, than i'm going to watch one hour photo and watch mr. williams limp.o
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| Re: Various actions by New Life Drug |
16-Dec-02/8:23 PM |
FUCK! THERE GOES ANOTHER ONE! have you seen my dog..he's like so high, and about yay long?
"I decided to build a raging fire
But little did I know, I would get hired By a boy scout in need He doesnt sell cookies, indeed and its such a YMCA-like shame" you are an artist indeed. in tweed.
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| Re: Anfal: Our 9/11 happened many times over by kawakurdi |
16-Dec-02/9:20 PM |
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"I put my head on the mist of your breast," wow. this was even better than that jude law movie. i need a cigarette and "The name of which village unsettled my heart" that's a hoot.sid and marty croft made a fortune doing this. you wont.C
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| Re: Elegy by moonUnit |
16-Dec-02/9:23 PM |
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to jesus who's birthday has become a niggerpolockindrag festival. enjoy your holidays and hand lotions.H
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16-Dec-02/10:15 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Dec-02/10:44 PM |
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yes, and boats and feet float on it too.
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