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opposition

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Nov 2002 · 3 comments

Standing there I grew baggage on my cells like polyps on a heavy breath. My thoughts funnel through me and stick to my mouth. What's in my mind? certainly not the sky turns red like cherries when I crave you. Certainly not my following your circles like a light fading in an opened window.

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Nov-02/10:09 AM Reply

"Standing there I grew baggage on my cells/
like polyps on a heavy breath."

What the fuck does that mean?

[n/a] kiki › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23-Nov-02/12:29 AM Reply

Well, polyps are growths that can keep inhibit one's breathing. I suppose I meant that I was slowly accumulating various sorts of mental/emotional growths or blockages that were keeping from functioning properly.

[8] horus8 14-Dec-02/3:56 PM Reply

when i was younger the rats ate my board game collection.;