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opposition (Free verse) by kiki

Standing there I grew baggage on my cells like polyps on a heavy breath. My thoughts funnel through me and stick to my mouth. What's in my mind? certainly not the sky turns red like cherries when I crave you. Certainly not my following your circles like a light fading in an opened window.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Nov-02/10:09 AM
"Standing there I grew baggage on my cells/
like polyps on a heavy breath."

What the fuck does that mean?




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