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opposition (Free verse) by kiki

Standing there I grew baggage on my cells like polyps on a heavy breath. My thoughts funnel through me and stick to my mouth. What's in my mind? certainly not the sky turns red like cherries when I crave you. Certainly not my following your circles like a light fading in an opened window.

kiki 23-Nov-02/12:29 AM
Well, polyps are growths that can keep inhibit one's breathing. I suppose I meant that I was slowly accumulating various sorts of mental/emotional growths or blockages that were keeping from functioning properly.




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