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Roll the dice (revised)

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Dec 2002 · 3 comments

It was a bold move Wasn't afraid I told you my feelings All of them right in your face I fought for our friendship But it turned into lies As our trust ended in conflict I went and rolled the dice Nothing's holding you back Just leave me alone Take everything with you Please pack up and go Now lonely again But I knew what I did was right Can't even talk to friends Unsure of my life As I looked for another person I saw you, hoping not to make a fight I thought you learned your lesson But you rolled the dice It wasn't fair Of your happiness Dating my friend, you dared Or was it all a test I wanted to end this Needed you back in my heart And if I can only have one kiss Then we would never again be apart And you felt the same way Nothing will make us leave each other's side As I have nothing left to say As we both rolled the dice (thanks miggy, for helping me)

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[8] horus8 14-Dec-02/4:40 PM Reply
i too, want to thank you miggy, for helping me, help myself. i can date again without anti-venom.
[10] Miggy 15-Dec-02/5:40 PM Reply
just glad to help
[10] Stephen Robins 1-Oct-03/8:23 AM Reply
Right I hope your happy with yourself I am now unfertile; well unless I can gather up the lake of gametes under my desk and put them in the fridge before all my baby paste dies. But god that is good poetry!