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I Am A Poor Little Boy In The Land Of Love (Free verse) by sweetzephyr
I am a poor little boy in the land of love Sans a single penny in my empty purse But yet I think, I am the richest boy in Earth For I have a lover, an entrancing little girl, Who loves me much like a baby adoring Its doll, and her love for me burns brighter, Than the broad daylight Sun, and explores Much deeper, than the Dynamic thoughts Of revered men. She blooms like the flowers In the celestial garden of my heart, spreading Her rosy fragrances, all over my burnt essence Yes, I am a poor little boy in the land of love Sans a single penny in my ever empty purse Yet, Riches wont aspire me, for in the hut of Rich love, I do reside contentedly evermore Ceaselessly unperturbed beside my rich heart Resting on my loves lap and caressing her hairs Pitying???. Those who lives in the rich mansion Never at peace within, Where dwells no love Beside their poor hearts, masked by the gold lust

Up the ladder: The Story Of Man
Down the ladder: Forgotten

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8
Weighted score: 4.9761596
Overall Rank: 8316
Posted: December 4, 2002 6:36 AM PST; Last modified: December 4, 2002 6:36 AM PST
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[n/a] poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.38 | 4-Dec-02/7:23 AM | Reply
Are you really from Nepal? Living there now?
[8] deleted user @ 216.214.13.41 | 4-Dec-02/3:35 PM | Reply
this is so THICK
and nice
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.101 | 4-Dec-02/3:46 PM | Reply
TRY AGAIN PLZ.
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Dec-02/4:37 PM | Reply
it was worth a shit while you were loved by another and oblivious because... but then in the last 4 or 5 sentences you bite your tail off by trying to criticize those with deep pockets...simply because anyone with half a brain understands the uselessness that accompanies the jealousy-guilt of that sentiment.6. i love the penny in the boys purse though.. nice twist..not lemonade mind you, but damn tasty still.
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