on At the Olde Absinthe by Limness
6 Sep 2002, 11:41 AM
Wonders of wormwood my dear.
on calendared by cobalt
24 Sep 2002, 8:14 PM
Stanza 3 is brilliant! The title rips me from the garden and plants me right back in the mundane. In spite of that, I like this poem. 9/10
on Bitter as Wormwood by vulcan
23 Sep 2002, 6:40 AM
A Curse upon all who decimate such sacred ground! Great poem! My wormwood has over taken the path in my herb garden but I love her still. You should see how she shines in moonlight! 10/10
on Punishment and Punishment again by vulcan
23 Sep 2002, 6:57 AM
As a Woman I feel that this poem is grossly gender bent! ;)
on For James Thomson(1834-1882):an Epitaph by vulcan
23 Sep 2002, 6:27 AM
I love this. now I must go find that city and see it for myself. 9/10
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2002, 3:48 PM
Simply Wicked! Not equiped to sodomise so there would be no question. Even if I was, what could I do? surely NOT that.
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2002, 11:23 AM
Number 10 for Number 1.
on Full Fathom Five by vulcan
17 Sep 2002, 11:37 AM
rides on the cusp between dark and light, this too is gray. and I like!
on NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8
17 Sep 2002, 11:51 AM
I thought the message was pretty clear. Christianity is the bane of humanity. 10!
on some deleted poem
9 Sep 2002, 10:31 AM
I want you to stand upright and to cool your eyes in the air, and to see how your back can bear Burdens-to try, to know, to learn, to grow. You are only his. You are his, part of him, you; Wife, and have no other life. You cannot think you cannot do;you cannot breathe, cannot see; There is "us", but there is not "me". And worst, in your thoughts you grow Contented so! *****It begins when you sink in his arms... It ends with your arms in his sink.****
on More 7-Eleven holdups. by Bachus
6 Sep 2002, 9:45 PM
Hey! These would be great at: http://www.templeofblackjesus.com
Funny shit! Solid 8!
Funny shit! Solid 8!
on some deleted poem
6 Sep 2002, 11:39 AM
You get nothing for something some-times, but something for nothing is a speculation wherein the getter gets something that nothing on earth can cause you to hold past the point where your LUCK changes.
on Crop Circle by Lenore
6 Sep 2002, 1:26 PM
Can you imagine my disappointment? I had high hopes for that film. Silly me, I thought it was going to be about Crop Circles. Instead they tried to spoon feed us crap about faith. Oh I did get a good chuckle at all the inappropriate moments. Aliens of superior intelligence rendered lifeless by water, come to a planet covered in such without so much as a wet suit?! Let the record show that this poem is in no way related to or in reference of that deplorable film.
on Pagan ME King by proteusplum
6 Sep 2002, 1:43 PM
Too bad about >do not float me out to sea> you seemed like a good candidate for a Viking funeral. Pity really, they're my favorite.
on Narcissus by proteusplum
6 Sep 2002, 2:48 PM
interesting that this just happened to follow Horus' fine gem.
how diaphanous. This poem is brilliant! The best yet! 10/10!!
how diaphanous. This poem is brilliant! The best yet! 10/10!!
on Celebration by unknown
6 Sep 2002, 11:30 AM
You naked scalp breathed cinnamon
?? Now I like this poem, but for the life of me I cannot see how that line is first rate. A bald head inhaling spice? I don't get it.
?? Now I like this poem, but for the life of me I cannot see how that line is first rate. A bald head inhaling spice? I don't get it.
on some deleted poem
23 Sep 2002, 6:53 AM
I think most of your poetry is magic. the last stanza here confirms it. 9/10