| Re: Celebration by unknown |
6-Sep-02/11:30 AM |
You naked scalp breathed cinnamon
?? Now I like this poem, but for the life of me I cannot see how that line is first rate. A bald head inhaling spice? I don't get it.
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6-Sep-02/11:39 AM |
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You get nothing for something some-times, but something for nothing is a speculation wherein the getter gets something that nothing on earth can cause you to hold past the point where your LUCK changes.
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| Re: At the Olde Absinthe by Limness |
6-Sep-02/11:41 AM |
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Wonders of wormwood my dear.
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| Re: *I am me* by savannah |
6-Sep-02/11:49 AM |
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I like this! And why can't she be all those things? Are we not the stuff of stars? 7/10
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| Re: Crop Circle by Lenore |
6-Sep-02/1:26 PM |
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Can you imagine my disappointment? I had high hopes for that film. Silly me, I thought it was going to be about Crop Circles. Instead they tried to spoon feed us crap about faith. Oh I did get a good chuckle at all the inappropriate moments. Aliens of superior intelligence rendered lifeless by water, come to a planet covered in such without so much as a wet suit?! Let the record show that this poem is in no way related to or in reference of that deplorable film.
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| Re: Pagan ME King by proteusplum |
6-Sep-02/1:43 PM |
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Too bad about >do not float me out to sea> you seemed like a good candidate for a Viking funeral. Pity really, they're my favorite.
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| Re: Pigeons by Limness |
6-Sep-02/1:49 PM |
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You're good, very good. 9/10
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| Re: Narcissus by proteusplum |
6-Sep-02/2:48 PM |
interesting that this just happened to follow Horus' fine gem.
how diaphanous. This poem is brilliant! The best yet! 10/10!!
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| Re: More 7-Eleven holdups. by Bachus |
6-Sep-02/9:45 PM |
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9-Sep-02/10:31 AM |
I want you to stand upright and to cool your eyes in the air, and to see how your back can bear Burdens-to try, to know, to learn, to grow. You are only his. You are his, part of him, you; Wife, and have no other life. You cannot think you cannot do;you cannot breathe, cannot see; There is "us", but there is not "me". And worst, in your thoughts you grow Contented so! *****It begins when you sink in his arms... It ends with your arms in his sink.****
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17-Sep-02/11:23 AM |
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| Re: Full Fathom Five by vulcan |
17-Sep-02/11:37 AM |
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rides on the cusp between dark and light, this too is gray. and I like!
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| Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8 |
17-Sep-02/11:51 AM |
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I thought the message was pretty clear. Christianity is the bane of humanity. 10!
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17-Sep-02/3:48 PM |
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Simply Wicked! Not equiped to sodomise so there would be no question. Even if I was, what could I do? surely NOT that.
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| Re: For James Thomson(1834-1882):an Epitaph by vulcan |
23-Sep-02/6:27 AM |
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I love this. now I must go find that city and see it for myself. 9/10
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| Re: Pilgrim by timfowler |
23-Sep-02/6:33 AM |
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I like it however I'm not crazy about the use of 'flaring'. I stumbled on that one line. over all I give it a 7/10
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| Re: Bitter as Wormwood by vulcan |
23-Sep-02/6:40 AM |
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A Curse upon all who decimate such sacred ground! Great poem! My wormwood has over taken the path in my herb garden but I love her still. You should see how she shines in moonlight! 10/10
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23-Sep-02/6:53 AM |
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I think most of your poetry is magic. the last stanza here confirms it. 9/10
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| Re: Punishment and Punishment again by vulcan |
23-Sep-02/6:57 AM |
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As a Woman I feel that this poem is grossly gender bent! ;)
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| Re: calendared by cobalt |
24-Sep-02/8:14 PM |
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Stanza 3 is brilliant! The title rips me from the garden and plants me right back in the mundane. In spite of that, I like this poem. 9/10
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