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*I am me* (Free verse) by savannah I am me
There will never be anyone like me.
I am special because I am unique.
I am a one of a kind.
I am stardust and dreams.
I am light and darkness.
I am hugs and kisses
And sometimes tears
I am love and hope
I am the words "I love you???
I am some ones smile and laughter.
I am swirls of all the colors of the rainbow put together,
And those that no one can name.
I trust yet I fear.
I hide yet I don???t hold anything back.
I am free to the world that is ahead of me.
I am a child becoming an adult
I am me, and me is just right
Its not supposed to satisfy you, but satisfy me
You cant change me that???s just who I am.
Forever like this there just no other me, like me!
Up the ladder:
Yesterday I cried
Down the ladder:
one childless girl
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.857143
Posted: September 5, 2002 5:43 PM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2002 5:43 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.96158 Overall Rank: 8519 Comments:
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poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.63
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5-Sep-02/6:33 PM
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How can you be all these things? What is it to be stardust and dreams? What is it to be hugs and kisses? This makes no sense. And why does the title have ** around it? To the trashcan with this.
yes take your lessons from birthmark, he shall turn you from child to adult. He will change you mould you, shape you, and only you, for he is agoraphobic and can only work with the select chosen few for fear of the FEAR
These comments are stupid. This poem for someone at 13 is a very good achievment. The point in poetry is to subjective, that is express youself just yourslef as much as and as good as you can. That is what this poem does. It's a good self-image of a teen. To give [0] is sheer stupidity.
I like this! And why can't she be all those things? Are we not the stuff of stars? 7/10
Hello my name is Savannah and I am the author the of the poem I am me, I would like to just thank you for taking the time to read it and comment about it. I also would like to thank you for standing up to those of peoples comments. That was very kind of you.
So once again thank you. Love always, Savannah
I think this is just precious and it made me smile.
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