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*I am me* (Free verse) by savannah

I am me There will never be anyone like me. I am special because I am unique. I am a one of a kind. I am stardust and dreams. I am light and darkness. I am hugs and kisses And sometimes tears I am love and hope I am the words "I love you??? I am some ones smile and laughter. I am swirls of all the colors of the rainbow put together, And those that no one can name. I trust yet I fear. I hide yet I don???t hold anything back. I am free to the world that is ahead of me. I am a child becoming an adult I am me, and me is just right Its not supposed to satisfy you, but satisfy me You cant change me that???s just who I am. Forever like this there just no other me, like me!

kawakurdi 6-Sep-02/8:35 AM
These comments are stupid. This poem for someone at 13 is a very good achievment. The point in poetry is to subjective, that is express youself just yourslef as much as and as good as you can. That is what this poem does. It's a good self-image of a teen. To give [0] is sheer stupidity.




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