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one childless girl (Free verse) by mallory180
I can see the anguish as she twist and turns
Never settled, always moving in a motionless form
Nothing controls her, her rage so strong, so passionate
The pain that life brings her, so cruel, so unfair
The tormented soul of a childless girl
A child robbed of her happiness but given much hatred
The years now behind her, but she cannot forget
The pain and horror engraved in her heart
Of the years in the house shared with the man and his belt
No bruising or scars are to be left for the eye to see
Only the pain left decaying inside her can be seen
If you look very close and look very deep, you see a childless girl
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.857143
Weighted score: 4.96158
Overall Rank: 8526
Posted: September 22, 2002 7:54 AM PDT; Last modified: September 22, 2002 7:54 AM PDT
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