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Curious (Free verse) by jsab78
You are my subject matter at least for the time being, Stand there still and silent or in a crowd talking, You are mine not knowing I own you, I'm curious to see everything you do, Studying your every gesture, Not for any special purpose like a science or a cure, Curious to see your perspectives and moves, The way you lower your hip when stricken by a groove, Don't feel my presence or flow with my energy, Don't notice my existence, It's not my personality, Hidden behind walls of words or lurking inside paintings, You are my specimen, You are my curiosity, You are mine because I'm just a little curious, Don't hold on, I'm using you, I'm leaving now and there will be no us to trust, Thanks for being there, Now I'm not so curious

Up the ladder: one childless girl
Down the ladder: Autumn Cried

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.857143
Weighted score: 4.96158
Overall Rank: 8527
Posted: October 6, 2002 8:35 PM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2002 8:35 PM PDT
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[9] Ninoy_Instigator @ 66.119.33.167 | 6-Oct-02/8:52 PM | Reply
Thats true in most cases, but I hope thats not everyone (Please people vote on mine, I dont know what people think. THank you)
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